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10-15-2020, 12:12 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14
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This reads more like an unpolished note when compared to some of your bangers. Few spots had rhyme droughts as well. Don't know if I'm a fan of the disjointed lines.
Don't take that the wrong way. You've got all the talent to make a better one. |
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