if you never say goodbye
 

simple

safety latch. the basement ballroom
dancing wolves to leaky cauldrons
great exalted, ye of faithful fortune. make me wanted
if you wish. i've traced
you often onto desktops with a razor from
my father's cupboard. made you paper cranes and
bought you supper. sent you love in silent wonder
whisper me your darkness i could shiver
here for years and smile. listen to you wax romance
through rotary receiver dial
how do you mean? i ask this every night
a coward in sheepskin. chained ourselves
to any missing link evolving between us
count me in, coach i'm ready to play. set in my praises
dreaming of some end-stage we may
never attain. i placed an envelope on our gravestones
with a letter that i copy and pasted
all it said, more or less
was see you later

This was a quirky one

Something about the way you were doing those continuations that made it “ quirky “ for me

Probably just the mongoloid way I’ve been indoctrinated into perceiving a verse Cause most of your shit is beyond fluid. So obviously it’s intentional . That being said? Good stuff as always . I’m more so ridiculing my own perspective

My apologies. Yeah I should of approached it different .

I see what you are doing

^ true crackhead.

cool verse.

lol no apology necessary muffin thanks

This reads more like an unpolished note when compared to some of your bangers. Few spots had rhyme droughts as well. Don't know if I'm a fan of the disjointed lines.

Don't take that the wrong way. You've got all the talent to make a better one.

lol dm
you didn't put the rhyme in the end of the line

so it not good and it doesn't rhyme apparently

ppl stoop af.


anyway, loved this! message+content> rhyme scheme any day of the damn week.

always loved the nostalgia you nested in each little writing you let us read. great stuff as yujual.


i will admit you seemed to chsnge up the thematic element towards the end but stayed on guard and focused. was dope. thanks for lighting the scene

Love ya bb