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Old 09-22-2020, 04:07 PM   #2
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This was cool.

"Then implement change at a slow pace. Kind of play it by ear ya know?
It wouldn't be so lonely if I could hear the ghosts. I know that's weird for most
But I spent 7 years alone just because my mirror broke. So far as spirits go
I try my best to keep em close, I guess that's schizophrenic tho"


Nice...

"Can't see the forest for the trees when stranded in the desert sand"

Hopefully this gets some more love. @Adverse will appreciate the poetic feel of this I think.

Solid writing here man. Keep it coming.
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