UserName vs. Coop {UserName wins}

[Coop]

What a let down....

I thought I'd get a high-end legend. User? One punch & his fatass is leakin
NC hates me so much I must be on probation: I keep getting trash on the weakend
The whole site thinks I'm crazy. You'd think the odds were stacked in your favor
But how you gonna cook me? You the only 'seasoned vet' who lacks any flavor
Fatboy wants beef but can't handle the steaks. Ya punches aint swell, son:
It’s extra-rare when they’re red, cuz ya verses are NEVER well-done
He wrote 20 at first, but saw it was only weak shit from outta storage
So this dumbass cut some lines down, now his verse has a power shortage
I know you dyin for a win, but it's a reach dude. It takes no effort to beat you
But since ur still all gassed up, go ahead n mix ammonia and bleach too
Been here a decade & STILL a bum bitch who never won shit; An irrelevant buffoon
who can't get anyone to talk about him... he's the biggest elephant in the room


@Da Brayn Lord go head & post his weak shit

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by UserName

FEEL THE HEAT

I don’t respect you, I know you’re a slouch in a bout
So I’m just gonna use this bar as an opener, like Ouch when he’s out
Gets a pass from me for comedic factor but not the hardest
I’m just loungin’ about, while you must have the worst depression
The only gun line I'm in, is at the Pawn Shop sellin' your murder weapon
I’m feeling this, great creativity. However, “your” murder weapon sounds the weapon HE’s just used to kill someone rather than yours... this my only critique
Clowned from a distance, now I'll win this round in an instant
He's had his back against the wall so much, it has mounting equipment
Dope
He's blind to facts, we know you're gay, it's not like we try to laugh
Not when 'Matte Black' isn’t just a paint for him, it's his Grindr Match
Reaching a bit... it’s ok though and kinda funny
Lyin' ass, this guy date rapes, and his promises are hollow too
Although his dates get rags to their lips more than Molotov bottles do
Dope
Lord knows, I’m a God to you, but his votes make me sad to hit him
‘Cuz If ANY of my lines are 3/10, ...it's in a "strokes until orgasm" system
Lol ok

Vs

Originally Posted by Coop

What a let down....

I thought I'd get a high-end legend. User? One punch & his fatass is leakin
NC hates me so much I must be on probation: I keep getting trash on the weakend
Already feel like ur a little more wordy than user but this doesn’t necessarily matter, and this is ok
The whole site thinks I'm crazy. You'd think the odds were stacked in your favor
But how you gonna cook me? You the only 'seasoned vet' who lacks any flavour cool
Fatboy wants beef but can't handle the steaks. Ya punches aint swell, son:
It’s extra-rare when they’re red, cuz ya verses are NEVER well-done
This is well done (HA) but my issue with it is that it don’t come off too fresh.. seen a lot of well done / rare flips
He wrote 20 at first, but saw it was only weak shit from outta storage
So this dumbass cut some lines down, now his verse has a power shortage
This is alright, good creativity
I know you dyin for a win, but it's a reach dude. It takes no effort to beat you
But since ur still all gassed up, go ahead n mix ammonia and bleach too
Not overly feeling this
Been here a decade & STILL a bum bitch who never won shit; An irrelevant buffoon
who can't get anyone to talk about him... he's the biggest elephant in the room
It’s not packing enough sting


@Da Brayn Lord go head & post his weak shit

I’ve got date rape rags / Molotov bottles and mountain equipment as my two favourite bars... then maybe the depression / gun line so already, I’ve got User taking this. Coop, I didn’t think you had a bad verse at all bro I just think you were outpunched by your opponent here. The bars I weren’t feeling from you were a hair worse than users too...

User wins

[Victor.]

Originally Posted by UserName

FEEL THE HEAT

I don’t respect you, I know you’re a slouch in a bout
So I’m just gonna use this bar as an opener, like Ouch when he’s out
..I missed this segment of ouch lore so I feel I’m missin sumn here
I’m just loungin’ about, while you must have the worst depression
The only gun line I'm in, is at the Pawn Shop sellin' your murder weapon
... lol ok cool. U could have killed this wit a better setup . But I still like it
Clowned from a distance, now I'll win this round in an instant
He's had his back against the wall so much, it has mounting equipment
...ok. Standard cool old school txt shit
He's blind to facts, we know you're gay, it's not like we try to laugh
Not when 'Matte Black' isn’t just a paint for him, it's his Grindr Match
...this is fire to me lol
Lyin' ass, this guy date rapes, and his promises are hollow too
Although his dates get rags to their lips more than Molotov bottles do
....nah I didn’t like this I dunno why . Cool and creative but didn’t appeal to me . Prolly the execution
Lord knows, I’m a God to you, but his votes make me sad to hit him
‘Cuz If ANY of my lines are 3/10, ...it's in a "strokes until orgasm" system
... I don’t know what u talking about here man . This is white ppl shit I assume

Originally Posted by Coop

What a let down....

I thought I'd get a high-end legend. User? One punch & his fatass is leakin
NC hates me so much I must be on probation: I keep getting trash on the weakend
....weird wording but ok cool idea for the most part
The whole site thinks I'm crazy. You'd think the odds were stacked in your favor
But how you gonna cook me? You the only 'seasoned vet' who lacks any flavor
....wow this is almost auto loss . It’s like a defeat or cum line . Like this isn’t creative bro . Not a good look
Fatboy wants beef but can't handle the steaks. Ya punches aint swell, son:
It’s extra-rare when they’re red, cuz ya verses are NEVER well-done
....wow holy shit . This is 1999 era shit dude . I ain’t even trying to troll but this is so cringe played corny like wtf
He wrote 20 at first, but saw it was only weak shit from outta storage
So this dumbass cut some lines down, now his verse has a power shortage
....smh no
I know you dyin for a win, but it's a reach dude. It takes no effort to beat you
But since ur still all gassed up, go ahead n mix ammonia and bleach too
....this is better
Been here a decade & STILL a bum bitch who never won shit; An irrelevant buffoon
who can't get anyone to talk about him... he's the biggest elephant in the room
...nah man plus this dude won a lot and has accolades not that it matters in the sense but since the line missed that makes it miss even harder bro


@Da Brayn Lord go head & post his weak shit

Yeah user won


It was old style vs old concepts here