Aero vs. Zelph {Aero wins}

Enbombz · 06-06-2020, 03:50 PM

Aero-The first was funny, but with all the build up I expected more. 2nd line I want mad about.wrong pipe was good. The I’m split was lotb. Catfish wasn’t a hit for me though nice imagery. closer was decent.

Overall though it was a funny ass verse. Had entertainment value.

Zelph- opener was funny. Nickel was okay bit basic, dressed up well. I get the tie in of planteers but doesn’t work for me when I read it. Bullying Austin was okay. Hereditary was cool.bopped with the hammer was decent.

It was a decent verse overall. A couple of concepts could’ve been refined better.

I’ve got opener, wrong pipe, I’m torn lotb, close
Vs opener hereditary and closer

V/Aero

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06-06-2020, 03:50 PM	#1
Enbombz Not Joog Join Date: Nov 2016 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 9-5 Rep Power: 5907773	Aero-The first was funny, but with all the build up I expected more. 2nd line I want mad about.wrong pipe was good. The I’m split was lotb. Catfish wasn’t a hit for me though nice imagery. closer was decent. Overall though it was a funny ass verse. Had entertainment value. Zelph- opener was funny. Nickel was okay bit basic, dressed up well. I get the tie in of planteers but doesn’t work for me when I read it. Bullying Austin was okay. Hereditary was cool.bopped with the hammer was decent. It was a decent verse overall. A couple of concepts could’ve been refined better. I’ve got opener, wrong pipe, I’m torn lotb, close Vs opener hereditary and closer V/Aero