Week 8: Coop (1-1) vs. evaD (0-1) - DAVE WINS

[Steve Fox]

Negative shit from this irrelevant bitch, you nearly made me hate the art
No show verse last week the only time your lines will make a chart

^ with better wording, this could've been dope. I think for your verse, it lacked sufficiently in better wording and interesting concepts, but I'll say you can refine this style as it doesn't stretch bars. If you read up on older battles in the archives, you'll improve, but as of now, I'd say you have no quotables from that verse. Great attempt though

vs.

Got an ugly bride, too. She'll do anything to get rid of this lame
Leave Dave & Buster legs wide open? ..only takes a drink & some video games

Between this and the anagram bar, you nearly had a quotable as well. Both bars suffer from some crappy wording or weird shit like "U emailing V?", but it was a better overall attempt in my eyes. I think you fared off better in the battle, but the wording being precise is what will take you to the top. Onlyfans, Dave and Buster, etc. show how creative you can be, but doing things like rhyming "to" twice to end a punch is what hurts it overall. If you also remove some of the filler, like "I put a shotgun to your verse's head"-esque bars, it'd be a smoother overall read.

v- Coop for being more consistent in his attempts, although, I found no quotables to be existent in either verse. I found his verse to be the better of the two