WEEK 6: Inno vs Candy 5-3 INNO WINS

Adverse · 05-04-2020, 01:44 PM

Agree that this was Candy's best showing of the season, gave us a taste of what he's like at full strength. Thought his narrative was pretty straight forward didn't leave much to ponder at, but sometimes being a straight shooter is the best path to tread. Did like the descriptors from the jump "crunching crumbles in my shirt tie" etc really liked the alliteration here too that's always a bonus for me when done efficently. Overall was a good read

Inno - I know some of the readers were confused about your topic direction this week but i think that's why i like your writing so much? Each verse is veiled with mystique and has a few different layers to it. Liked the overall narrative, and liked how you kinda spun this picture into your own subject instead of just taking the easy road that was already paved for you. Truly an "innovator"

Honestly folks hate to say it but this one comes down to personal preference again for me and I've got Inno by a hair. Thanks for the short and sweet read this week fellas

V/Inno

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05-04-2020, 01:44 PM	#11
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Agree that this was Candy's best showing of the season, gave us a taste of what he's like at full strength. Thought his narrative was pretty straight forward didn't leave much to ponder at, but sometimes being a straight shooter is the best path to tread. Did like the descriptors from the jump "crunching crumbles in my shirt tie" etc really liked the alliteration here too that's always a bonus for me when done efficently. Overall was a good read Inno - I know some of the readers were confused about your topic direction this week but i think that's why i like your writing so much? Each verse is veiled with mystique and has a few different layers to it. Liked the overall narrative, and liked how you kinda spun this picture into your own subject instead of just taking the easy road that was already paved for you. Truly an "innovator" Honestly folks hate to say it but this one comes down to personal preference again for me and I've got Inno by a hair. Thanks for the short and sweet read this week fellas V/Inno