Week 5: Champ Match: Clutbuck vs Universe [UNIVERSE WINS VIA DQ]

[Candy]

universe:

dope story telling dude it was long and some ways drawn out but you still had solid substance of combined bars to hold the majority of it together.. the story delivery was def cool it read very smoothly.. rhyme structure wasnt off the hook but it didnt hinder so it def suited the piece.. all in all man a real solid verse here from you the climax of the story was dope..

diablo:

hey man i really really liked this i think creatively its off the scale.. i think that rhyme wise and quirkiness was out there to.. your direction was hot.. i think the flip to making it about your opponent lost a lil of the flavour you had going but that was just me.. though saying that your end punchline was dope.. all in all cool and cute piece.. thanks..

vote = universe

his story was just that much fuller as an overall read in containing the reader.. cool match guys thanks