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HE / HIM / FRAC
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
Posts: 11,592
Battle Record: 56-21
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Let’s be honest I’m on this ,these niggas won’t punch but ama key some
Knock 2 birds off till I have 2 heads under my belt like a fucking threesome.... I fuck with it, but I still see that 'yeah fuck it ima key something setup' so I know you're being lazy and making excuses Hold the grip to yah dome let it spit till your gone that’s death applied Must be looking to die, but you won’t hear death coming when the barrel leaves yah vision black call it def I... I don't get where the defy connection is Spray 9’s and leave 2 bodies cold in the gutter pilin Cuz if these fagots thought they was winning their more delusional than Leo in shutter island... this is a pretty basic flip. It's just a reference. You could've said 'more delusional than barc talking about his record' to the same effect. It's just kind of... Meh And yo... I got 2 wife’s slurping cum while u both play cucks Give em meat sweats n Have Em turn freaks for the balls no Milwaukee bucks... like giannis? I don't understand why 'Have Em' is capitalized. It's mechanically sound but the 'ball' jokes are kind of old news Call it day care cuz they gon take kids i don’t play far And... I’ll have both those sluts in line taking turns for a ride like a state fair... not the worst park o a scheme... Maybe combined with thr last punch it's something, but jokes like 'the village bicycle' make the flip here feel corny Innos an ugly fag, heres what il propose instead Il see that you're Indated with demands, like admin shut the fuck up n close that thread cool idea, but the word you're looking for is 'inundated' never at gatherings, never the type girls dive at But here il make u the life of the house Party, ..... by ripping ya heads off on a live chat I don't get it. Poems, 9000 posts n a sex life? Il snub that prediction Sayin you've paid for what you got, it can only pornhub subscription okay Only got accomplishments when the site died n that's a sheer weak trend Shining when theres no crowd..... you're worse than that last wrestlemania weekend nice. I appreciate that it's personal Fucks an oorie?, another weird topical guy that mights apart see The type you wouldn't leave alone with ya kids, when quotes don't show up within quotes Okay, more silly than anything but it works for me I got Defiant with the harder hits. Good shit guys, props for pulling through a 3 way V/def |
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Ukrainian Howlitzers
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,098
Battle Record: 41-24
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Guys, first and foremost i apologize that this is going to end 3-2. It sucks and i'm sorry it's happening to you two. That being said, i have a schedule and need to get week 2 set-up so i can keep this moving. Thanks in advance for your understanding. It happens, and is always unfortunate when it does ... I'm going to break the tie
Let’s be honest I’m on this ,these niggas won’t punch but ama key some Knock 2 birds off till I have 2 heads under my belt like a fucking threesome.... wording seems a bit off, but it's an interesting concept...coolish Hold the grip to yah dome let it spit till your gone that’s death applied Must be looking to die, but you won’t hear death coming when the barrel leaves yah vision black call it def I... hmm...i think this is just rushed wordign wise...nah Spray 9’s and leave 2 bodies cold in the gutter pilin Cuz if these fagots thought they was winning their more delusional than Leo in shutter island... ehh, love the movie but this is a pretty generic and basic reference...its okay, but far from good And yo... I got 2 wife’s slurping cum while u both play cucks Give em meat sweats n Have Em turn freaks for the balls no Milwaukee bucks... lol, this was cool Call it day care cuz they gon take kids i don’t play far And... I’ll have both those sluts in line taking turns for a ride like a state fair... okay, feels basic and dated...worth a bit of a chuckle vs. Innos an ugly fag, heres what il propose instead Il see that you're Indated with demands, like admin shut the fuck up n close that thread i did in n' date against him , and i think thats the actual word you were going for... anyways as is this just doesn't work and is a miss never at gatherings, never the type girls dive at But here il make u the life of the house Party, ..... by ripping ya heads off on a live chat don't get the reference...did a quick search and still dont see what ur getting at here Poems, 9000 posts n a sex life? Il snub that prediction Sayin you've paid for what you got, it can only pornhub subscription snub that prediction? what prediction? he self predicts he'll write a poem and get laid? Porn hub punch is okay.. i'm not really familiar with 'i paid for what i got' as a phrase....this is okay and somehwat lolish Only got accomplishments when the site died n that's a sheer weak trend Shining when theres no crowd..... you're worse than that last wrestlemania weekend Cool. this is a good ref and punch Fucks an oorie?, another weird topical guy that mights apart see The type you wouldn't leave alone with ya kids, when HI 12 sounds like a party Nah. this is lame conceptually to me... and mights apart see? Your setups seem lazy and mehh, takes away from the bars focus on putting more effort into this part of your writting Overall pretty lack lustre battle imo. I think this is probably being avoided vote wise cuz it is a pretty tough all. Defiant probably has the bar of the battle with the wrestlemania ref, but more misses overall....On the whole Inno edged this to me for more enjoyable 'misses' , and two coolish bars vs. one Props to both... Vote Inno
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