Summer Classic Topical: Round 1: 3. Scar Vs. 14. Candy [Scar 5-2]

[Blue Bayou]

Candy - Enjoyed this read & poetic piece... bar structure was subtle, concise and well delivered. Multiple spots of well-crafted imagery throughout the story, and i quite like the angle you took in relation to the picture

Scar - From a technical writing perspective this was for the most part pretty impressive & well crafted.. A lot of diff elements were presented throughout, & for the storyline you went with, i did enjoy how it was concluded


This is a tough one. Both were well done & completely different not only in their approaches, but in their writing styles... Typically in this kindve situation I would roll with who i thought had the 'better written' piece, as i am the type that prefers a nice flow & multi usage over a more poetic approach, but i cant help but feel like i slightly enjoyed the imagery and direction of Candy's piece.. especially in relation to the picture
Complete toss up... props to both

I vote Candy