Summer Classic Topical: Round 1: 3. Scar Vs. 14. Candy [Scar 5-2]

NYCSPITZ · 07-25-2019, 11:21 PM

I thought candy had some dope lines. It just felt disjointed and the connecting concepts were a bit too disparate for coherence imo. Some nice visuals but you gotta tie them together a lil better.

Scar had some dope rhyme schemes and imagery. Like candy i thought the story jumped from here to there a bit savagely at parts. But it was more coherent and enjoyable imo this time around

Mvgt scar

07-25-2019, 11:21 PM	#12
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	I thought candy had some dope lines. It just felt disjointed and the connecting concepts were a bit too disparate for coherence imo. Some nice visuals but you gotta tie them together a lil better. Scar had some dope rhyme schemes and imagery. Like candy i thought the story jumped from here to there a bit savagely at parts. But it was more coherent and enjoyable imo this time around Mvgt scar __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

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