Summer Classic Topical: Round 1: 2. Mr. J Vs. 15. Diablo [Diablo 5-3]

NYCSPITZ · 07-25-2019, 11:15 PM

Dope battle. I thought literary wise in a Shakespearean sense, Lars dominated. The Japanese wording was a nice touch. I like the way you Storytell with a balance of edge and flow.

Mr. J came with that nyc sort of hood bop that i fuck with. I liked the ending to yours a little more than Lars it was a nice lol mind bender. I was flowing to it sort of at a wu tang rhythm.

Close battle I think both fell off in Parts Lars unnecessarily used obscure words where more laconic verbiage would have sufficed and j lost his bop a few times. At the end of the day it's preference and I liked mrj a little more this time. Good battle

V- Mr j

07-25-2019, 11:15 PM	#9
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Dope battle. I thought literary wise in a Shakespearean sense, Lars dominated. The Japanese wording was a nice touch. I like the way you Storytell with a balance of edge and flow. Mr. J came with that nyc sort of hood bop that i fuck with. I liked the ending to yours a little more than Lars it was a nice lol mind bender. I was flowing to it sort of at a wu tang rhythm. Close battle I think both fell off in Parts Lars unnecessarily used obscure words where more laconic verbiage would have sufficed and j lost his bop a few times. At the end of the day it's preference and I liked mrj a little more this time. Good battle V- Mr j __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

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