LR WK 4: Joog Vs Blue Bayou - Joog wins

Kill Spree · 04-09-2019, 10:22 AM

LIGHTNING ROUND

[b]Bars due ASAP THIS CLOSES IN 24HRS

VOTING WILL GO A FEW HRS LONGER

Blue Bayou · 04-09-2019, 11:30 AM

Hi Joog,

i’m throwing a party! ppl are heading to the lake this August
you can come to, if medics find smelling salts that’ll make u conscious

joog · 04-09-2019, 11:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

That was one of my best verses, just let me vent

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Nah, its fine. too much has been said... to me its more than just the HOF recognition, im defending my work

a week of saucy, buttery tears cuz we said ya best shit is wack
smh. a few NO's for the hollandaise later we can still dip baguettes in the chat

Cereal · 04-09-2019, 02:06 PM

vote = blue bayou

for the imagery he hit with my clarity and directness.. though blues was simpler i think it paid off in this instance.. dope battle guys g/l

bleak · 04-09-2019, 03:38 PM

Weirdly enough I've seen Hollandaise done somewhat recently. Don't remember by who but I feel like Blue or Barc are the usual suspects.

Blue had a creatively worded punch and I liked the change of pace

BB

Barcotic · 04-09-2019, 03:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Hi Joog,

i’m throwing a party! ppl are heading to the lake this August
you can come to, if medics find smelling salts that’ll make u conscious

pretty good
a little on the simple side but this is clean w dope wording. almost wish it had more tho, like sutn to do w/ knocking him out in the setup.. yeah i realize itd be hard to have that + sutn about a party or w/e but u cud make it work
gd punch tho

Quote:

Originally Posted by joog

a week of saucy, buttery tears cuz we said ya best shit is wack
smh. a few NO's for the hollandaise later we can still dip baguettes in the chat

fire tbh, executed perfectly
got a funny feelin this wp was originally planned for me LOL nonetheless

v/joog
this was dope for a 1-2

Suthaveli · 04-09-2019, 10:02 PM

I have a love/hate w.the approach blue did w.his setup: I luv the sarcastic friendly tone it gave. I hate it wasn't any aggression to sell his punch completely, wldve wrk great w.the smell salt. Punch itself was a nice concept imo.
I thought joog bar is dope clean af nice punch wp etc. Idk this kid but I've been consistently liking his bars the last few weeks. Links to his material?

Good battle but mvgt- joog

Real Spit · 04-10-2019, 12:41 AM

Didn't care for the smelling salts line. There's no real misdirection to sell it because the set up was weak to me, and it's not a creative concept IMO. Wording is good as usual

Joog I thought yours was creative as fuck and hit hard the way you laid it out.

v/Joog

Kill Spree · 04-12-2019, 10:20 AM

Thought both bars were dope.. blues bar had that dope witty ness. Clever but I liked Joog’s personal/wordplay on blues HOF shit. Got joog edging this

Maximus · 04-12-2019, 12:54 PM

wasnt really a fan of the smelling salts line, i got joog taking this

Kill Spree · 04-12-2019, 01:18 PM

Lmfao

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04-09-2019, 10:22 AM	#1
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	LR WK 4: Joog Vs Blue Bayou - Joog wins LIGHTNING ROUND [b]Bars due ASAP THIS CLOSES IN 24HRS VOTING WILL GO A FEW HRS LONGER @joig @Blue Bayou

04-09-2019, 11:30 AM	#2
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04-10-2019, 12:41 AM	#8
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608133	Didn't care for the smelling salts line. There's no real misdirection to sell it because the set up was weak to me, and it's not a creative concept IMO. Wording is good as usual Joog I thought yours was creative as fuck and hit hard the way you laid it out. v/Joog Last edited by Real Spit; 04-10-2019 at 01:21 AM.

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04-09-2019, 02:06 PM	#4
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 855 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312300	vote = blue bayou for the imagery he hit with my clarity and directness.. though blues was simpler i think it paid off in this instance.. dope battle guys g/l

04-09-2019, 10:02 PM	#7
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534023	I have a love/hate w.the approach blue did w.his setup: I luv the sarcastic friendly tone it gave. I hate it wasn't any aggression to sell his punch completely, wldve wrk great w.the smell salt. Punch itself was a nice concept imo. I thought joog bar is dope clean af nice punch wp etc. Idk this kid but I've been consistently liking his bars the last few weeks. Links to his material? Good battle but mvgt- joog

04-12-2019, 10:20 AM	#9
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Thought both bars were dope.. blues bar had that dope witty ness. Clever but I liked Joog’s personal/wordplay on blues HOF shit. Got joog edging this

04-12-2019, 12:54 PM	#10
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	wasnt really a fan of the smelling salts line, i got joog taking this

04-12-2019, 01:18 PM	#11
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Lmfao Join wins