LR WK 4: Joog Vs Blue Bayou - Joog wins
 

@joig @Blue Bayou

Hi Joog,

i’m throwing a party! ppl are heading to the lake this August
you can come to, if medics find smelling salts that’ll make u conscious

a week of saucy, buttery tears cuz we said ya best shit is wack
smh. a few NO's for the hollandaise later we can still dip baguettes in the chat

vote = blue bayou

for the imagery he hit with my clarity and directness.. though blues was simpler i think it paid off in this instance.. dope battle guys g/l

Weirdly enough I've seen Hollandaise done somewhat recently. Don't remember by who but I feel like Blue or Barc are the usual suspects.

Blue had a creatively worded punch and I liked the change of pace

BB

pretty good
a little on the simple side but this is clean w dope wording. almost wish it had more tho, like sutn to do w/ knocking him out in the setup.. yeah i realize itd be hard to have that + sutn about a party or w/e but u cud make it work
gd punch tho

fire tbh, executed perfectly
got a funny feelin this wp was originally planned for me LOL nonetheless

v/joog
this was dope for a 1-2

I have a love/hate w.the approach blue did w.his setup: I luv the sarcastic friendly tone it gave. I hate it wasn't any aggression to sell his punch completely, wldve wrk great w.the smell salt. Punch itself was a nice concept imo.
I thought joog bar is dope clean af nice punch wp etc. Idk this kid but I've been consistently liking his bars the last few weeks. Links to his material?

Good battle but mvgt- joog

Didn't care for the smelling salts line. There's no real misdirection to sell it because the set up was weak to me, and it's not a creative concept IMO. Wording is good as usual

Joog I thought yours was creative as fuck and hit hard the way you laid it out.

v/Joog

Thought both bars were dope.. blues bar had that dope witty ness. Clever but I liked Joog’s personal/wordplay on blues HOF shit. Got joog edging this

wasnt really a fan of the smelling salts line, i got joog taking this

Lmfao

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