The State of Text -Vent Piece.

Sinacog · 01-21-2019, 10:25 PM

This is a pretty dope piece, Genocide. Really no complaints, I believe the reason you think text is like this - you need to go on RR more - text is alive there. Here, it's okay though..used to be better I assume? lol..but this was pretty niice..good multi-syllabic rhyming..good structure..good rhyme schemes..I enjoy some of the one-liners..was dope and crisp..niice one man..glad to have you write something like this..niice one..keep it up..man..

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01-21-2019, 10:25 PM	#20
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	This is a pretty dope piece, Genocide. Really no complaints, I believe the reason you think text is like this - you need to go on RR more - text is alive there. Here, it's okay though..used to be better I assume? lol..but this was pretty niice..good multi-syllabic rhyming..good structure..good rhyme schemes..I enjoy some of the one-liners..was dope and crisp..niice one man..glad to have you write something like this..niice one..keep it up..man..