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06-07-2013, 11:29 PM
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The Clown Prince
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Quite...a higher calibur of writing one I am fond of
scattered metaphors and other miscellaneous references were intriguing the flow was drawn out perfectly to fit your word choice but after you switched up at the end with a more futuristic vibe... ehhhh I kinda got turned off...good show though...very good
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