Contenders Match: Cashius (3-1) vs. Jabari Black (3-1) - CASHIUS WINS

For Battling · 07-16-2018, 07:19 AM

COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411

IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding

MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES

PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY
NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT

@Cashius @Jabari Black

Jabari Black · 07-20-2018, 10:23 AM

Punch sent to Zelph @Cashius

Cashius · 07-20-2018, 11:40 PM

You tough ock? Nawww you love cock....Follow him for a night and then you’ll see
There’s gonna be Men In Black in a Flash...and you’ll pray to GOD it wipes your memory

Jabari Black · 07-20-2018, 11:47 PM

Violent scene! I’ll creep up. This Chloroform Cloth’ll be the end of you/
Try to scream...I’ll muffle ya voice with a rag over ya face like a gangland interview/

For Battling · 07-21-2018, 08:08 AM

Dope battle here, damn props to both of you for dropping nice bars.

Cashius - this was a nice nameflip tied in very nicely with the MIB reference and I haven’t seen that used on him before so that gives this even more impact. Very dope bar, well done sir.

Jabari - nice line and I love the way you executed your concept, I have no complaints with this bar at all. It was overall a dope bar.

This can definitely go either way and is certainly BOTW. Props to both, Ive been waiting to see this kind of shit and I’m happy you’ve delivered. Now after debating on who to vote for I’m gonna have to ultimately go with Cashius here for a SLIGHTLY better bar.

Vote Cashius

Amen · 07-21-2018, 08:12 AM

Meh, there is why I enjoy metaphors over a simile. Just comes off more impactful IMO. Both concepts ok, Cash’s much more effective.

V/Cash

Flow · 07-21-2018, 10:21 AM

I liked cash men in black concept however in the end it is a bit of a corny gay rape sort of line for me an takes away a bit of the sting. Total just down to my preference in this vote because technically both were very good but on preference I'm going to vote black.

DMS · 07-21-2018, 11:23 AM

Thought it was really close but JB’s just seemed to role offcthe tongue so well. Maybe it’s the reader not the writer but I can tell exactly how he’d say it just from reading it. It’s not quite the same with Cashious. I thought both bars we really close in terms of complexity and skill as a writer.

V/ JB

takemtwoschool · 07-21-2018, 11:33 AM

Pretty cool battle here imo. Not the best drop I've seen from either, but fair enough. Cashius concept seemed a bit dated while Jabari's was very fresh. Thats wat called it here for me.

Vote / Jabari Black

Plot · 07-21-2018, 12:27 PM

Sick 1-2 battle here.
Both are dope it's a really hard one to pick.
Cash had lolz and was well setup to the punch, really well done.
Jabari also was well-rounded, it comes down to what was a fresher concept...
And I think Jabari got it, only coz MIB is dated.. even tho its fresh here.
Really hard: so Im going with Jabari coz I havent seen that angle before.

Allen Knight · 07-21-2018, 03:23 PM

Cool battle, got cash his hit harder imo.

BodySnatcher · 07-21-2018, 07:30 PM

Dope battle here. I got JB with a more aggressive/fresh concept as Cash men in black scheme was dope but ended lackluster for me. Concept was dope though

Schadenfreude · 07-21-2018, 08:05 PM

VOTE CASHIUS pretty good from both, but the humor factor took Cash's bar over the top.

For Battling · 07-22-2018, 05:22 AM

10-7 Cashius

Needs more votes.
@Killing Spree @MMLP @Incredible @Twodrop @Aero @Blue Bayou @DMS @Infiltrate @DynamiCz @Destroyer @Chyeahhh!!! @bleak @Barcotic @Chainz @Ghost1 @Diablo @sraL @Hush @Ryno @Viper @Em Kay Gee @veritas @Defiant @Plot

Kill Spree · 07-22-2018, 06:48 AM

Fuck with both bars just felt JB’s could use a bit more sting to it. Cash bar was more direct so I’m edging this to him

Destroyer · 07-22-2018, 08:56 AM

Both were good
Cash was better

V/cash

Chainz · 07-22-2018, 09:02 AM

vote=cashius

this one was close as fuck im feeling cashius bar more here

Blue Bayou · 07-22-2018, 11:05 AM

Dope battle.. both had cool concepts worded well

Cash edged it to me.. Cash was LOL and I the way he did the Meta tie in with the "wipes your memory " was dope

Props to both... Cash edged it imo

DynamiCz · 07-22-2018, 01:09 PM

Both bars was dope!
I got JB here, his punch was more up to date
Cash punch was dope especially with the wording, but I seen the MIB concept done a lot

Props to both
V-JB

bleak · 07-22-2018, 01:47 PM

JB has a very pronounced style which I fuck it. I just thiink you could have utilized ur setup better.

Ok at first at thought the Men In Black was not a gay insult but then I caught it and damn this shit fire. I thought the wording was weird, jumping perspectives but ur speaking to us, not him. I was like damn he should have used w/ the flash not in a flash but now it makes sense.

V/Cash great battle

07-16-2018, 07:19 AM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Contenders Match: Cashius (3-1) vs. Jabari Black (3-1) - CASHIUS WINS COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411 IMPORTANT RULES: - No biting - No swaying - No recycling - No feeding MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY VOTING ENDS SUNDAY NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT @Cashius @Jabari Black

07-21-2018, 03:23 PM	#11
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Cool battle, got cash his hit harder imo. __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

07-21-2018, 08:05 PM	#13
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049084	VOTE CASHIUS pretty good from both, but the humor factor took Cash's bar over the top. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

07-22-2018, 05:22 AM	#14
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	10-7 Cashius Needs more votes. @Killing Spree @MMLP @Incredible @Twodrop @Aero @Blue Bayou @DMS @Infiltrate @DynamiCz @Destroyer @Chyeahhh!!! @bleak @Barcotic @Chainz @Ghost1 @Diablo @sraL @Hush @Ryno @Viper @Em Kay Gee @veritas @Defiant @Plot Last edited by For Battling; 07-22-2018 at 05:46 PM.

07-22-2018, 11:05 AM	#18
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,098 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502335	Dope battle.. both had cool concepts worded well Cash edged it to me.. Cash was LOL and I the way he did the Meta tie in with the "wipes your memory " was dope Props to both... Cash edged it imo __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

07-20-2018, 10:23 AM	#2
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Punch sent to Zelph @Cashius

07-20-2018, 11:40 PM	#3
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	You tough ock? Nawww you love cock....Follow him for a night and then you’ll see There’s gonna be Men In Black in a Flash...and you’ll pray to GOD it wipes your memory

07-20-2018, 11:47 PM	#4
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Violent scene! I’ll creep up. This Chloroform Cloth’ll be the end of you/ Try to scream...I’ll muffle ya voice with a rag over ya face like a gangland interview/

07-21-2018, 08:08 AM	#5
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Dope battle here, damn props to both of you for dropping nice bars. Cashius - this was a nice nameflip tied in very nicely with the MIB reference and I haven’t seen that used on him before so that gives this even more impact. Very dope bar, well done sir. Jabari - nice line and I love the way you executed your concept, I have no complaints with this bar at all. It was overall a dope bar. This can definitely go either way and is certainly BOTW. Props to both, Ive been waiting to see this kind of shit and I’m happy you’ve delivered. Now after debating on who to vote for I’m gonna have to ultimately go with Cashius here for a SLIGHTLY better bar. Vote Cashius

07-21-2018, 08:12 AM	#6
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,462 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Meh, there is why I enjoy metaphors over a simile. Just comes off more impactful IMO. Both concepts ok, Cash’s much more effective. V/Cash

07-21-2018, 11:23 AM	#8
DMS DMS—Diddled My Stick Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 1,104 Rep Power: 0	Thought it was really close but JB’s just seemed to role offcthe tongue so well. Maybe it’s the reader not the writer but I can tell exactly how he’d say it just from reading it. It’s not quite the same with Cashious. I thought both bars we really close in terms of complexity and skill as a writer. V/ JB

07-21-2018, 11:33 AM	#9
takemtwoschool Trend Setter Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 73 Rep Power: 3759303	Pretty cool battle here imo. Not the best drop I've seen from either, but fair enough. Cashius concept seemed a bit dated while Jabari's was very fresh. Thats wat called it here for me. Vote / Jabari Black

07-21-2018, 12:27 PM	#10
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	Sick 1-2 battle here. Both are dope it's a really hard one to pick. Cash had lolz and was well setup to the punch, really well done. Jabari also was well-rounded, it comes down to what was a fresher concept... And I think Jabari got it, only coz MIB is dated.. even tho its fresh here. Really hard: so Im going with Jabari coz I havent seen that angle before.

07-21-2018, 07:30 PM	#12
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840899	Dope battle here. I got JB with a more aggressive/fresh concept as Cash men in black scheme was dope but ended lackluster for me. Concept was dope though

07-22-2018, 06:48 AM	#15
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Fuck with both bars just felt JB’s could use a bit more sting to it. Cash bar was more direct so I’m edging this to him

07-22-2018, 09:02 AM	#17
Chainz Junior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 17 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 214047	vote=cashius this one was close as fuck im feeling cashius bar more here

07-22-2018, 01:09 PM	#19
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	Both bars was dope! I got JB here, his punch was more up to date Cash punch was dope especially with the wording, but I seen the MIB concept done a lot Props to both V-JB __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

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