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For Battling 07-16-2018 07:19 AM

Contenders Match: Cashius (3-1) vs. Jabari Black (3-1) - CASHIUS WINS
 
COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411


IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding



MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES


PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY
NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT


@Cashius @Jabari Black

Jabari Black 07-20-2018 10:23 AM

Punch sent to Zelph @Cashius

Cashius 07-20-2018 11:40 PM

You tough ock? Nawww you love cock....Follow him for a night and then you’ll see
There’s gonna be Men In Black in a Flash...and you’ll pray to GOD it wipes your memory

Jabari Black 07-20-2018 11:47 PM

Violent scene! I’ll creep up. This Chloroform Cloth’ll be the end of you/
Try to scream...I’ll muffle ya voice with a rag over ya face like a gangland interview/

For Battling 07-21-2018 08:08 AM

Dope battle here, damn props to both of you for dropping nice bars.

Cashius - this was a nice nameflip tied in very nicely with the MIB reference and I haven’t seen that used on him before so that gives this even more impact. Very dope bar, well done sir.

Jabari - nice line and I love the way you executed your concept, I have no complaints with this bar at all. It was overall a dope bar.


This can definitely go either way and is certainly BOTW. Props to both, Ive been waiting to see this kind of shit and I’m happy you’ve delivered. Now after debating on who to vote for I’m gonna have to ultimately go with Cashius here for a SLIGHTLY better bar.

Vote Cashius

Amen 07-21-2018 08:12 AM

Meh, there is why I enjoy metaphors over a simile. Just comes off more impactful IMO. Both concepts ok, Cash’s much more effective.

V/Cash

Flow 07-21-2018 10:21 AM

I liked cash men in black concept however in the end it is a bit of a corny gay rape sort of line for me an takes away a bit of the sting. Total just down to my preference in this vote because technically both were very good but on preference I'm going to vote black.

DMS 07-21-2018 11:23 AM

Thought it was really close but JB’s just seemed to role offcthe tongue so well. Maybe it’s the reader not the writer but I can tell exactly how he’d say it just from reading it. It’s not quite the same with Cashious. I thought both bars we really close in terms of complexity and skill as a writer.

V/ JB

takemtwoschool 07-21-2018 11:33 AM

Pretty cool battle here imo. Not the best drop I've seen from either, but fair enough. Cashius concept seemed a bit dated while Jabari's was very fresh. Thats wat called it here for me.


Vote / Jabari Black

Plot 07-21-2018 12:27 PM

Sick 1-2 battle here.
Both are dope it's a really hard one to pick.
Cash had lolz and was well setup to the punch, really well done.
Jabari also was well-rounded, it comes down to what was a fresher concept...
And I think Jabari got it, only coz MIB is dated.. even tho its fresh here.
Really hard: so Im going with Jabari coz I havent seen that angle before.

Allen Knight 07-21-2018 03:23 PM

Cool battle, got cash his hit harder imo.

BodySnatcher 07-21-2018 07:30 PM

Dope battle here. I got JB with a more aggressive/fresh concept as Cash men in black scheme was dope but ended lackluster for me. Concept was dope though

Schadenfreude 07-21-2018 08:05 PM

VOTE CASHIUS pretty good from both, but the humor factor took Cash's bar over the top.

For Battling 07-22-2018 05:22 AM

10-7 Cashius

Needs more votes.
@Killing Spree @MMLP @Incredible @Twodrop @Aero @Blue Bayou @DMS @Infiltrate @DynamiCz @Destroyer @Chyeahhh!!! @bleak @Barcotic @Chainz @Ghost1 @Diablo @sraL @Hush @Ryno @Viper @Em Kay Gee @veritas @Defiant @Plot

Kill Spree 07-22-2018 06:48 AM

Fuck with both bars just felt JB’s could use a bit more sting to it. Cash bar was more direct so I’m edging this to him

Destroyer 07-22-2018 08:56 AM

Both were good
Cash was better

V/cash

Chainz 07-22-2018 09:02 AM

vote=cashius

this one was close as fuck im feeling cashius bar more here

Blue Bayou 07-22-2018 11:05 AM

Dope battle.. both had cool concepts worded well

Cash edged it to me.. Cash was LOL and I the way he did the Meta tie in with the "wipes your memory " was dope

Props to both... Cash edged it imo

DynamiCz 07-22-2018 01:09 PM

Both bars was dope!
I got JB here, his punch was more up to date
Cash punch was dope especially with the wording, but I seen the MIB concept done a lot

Props to both
V-JB

bleak 07-22-2018 01:47 PM

JB has a very pronounced style which I fuck it. I just thiink you could have utilized ur setup better.

Ok at first at thought the Men In Black was not a gay insult but then I caught it and damn this shit fire. I thought the wording was weird, jumping perspectives but ur speaking to us, not him. I was like damn he should have used w/ the flash not in a flash but now it makes sense.

V/Cash great battle


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