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Old 06-03-2018, 12:12 AM   #7
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Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/
nah this is too basic bru
Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/
lmaoooo this is good
U got robbed once - U’ll get robbed again. Give up ya cash or the torch spray, bitch/
Cus I’ll let the ‘flame blow over the cake’...that’s a birthday wish/
alright not bad, had potential for more if done better but nonetheless it’s an ok bar
The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/
damn ok, pretty good here
You the hardest nigga out the ‘Burb huh? Well, I line eagles plus the 9’s lethal/
Leave u in a morgue w/ pale dead bodies...now you LITERALLY surrounded by white people/
lol I liked this
U poppin dick pills like the shit’s cool. Saw ya bitch n now it all makes sense, fool/
Cus if I was smashing that ugly white girl, I would take extenze too/
good again, ok Jabari I see you
You fake fraud. That white bitch’ll have her murder scene taped off/
They’ll put that ‘white girl in a bag’...now you slinging 8-ball/
just ok
Act brave n it’ll be like a Drake diss if you tryna scrap, ace/
You’ll end up ‘dead, beat’, n exposed after getting in ‘Black Face’
ehh decent at best

Jabari....good verse man, definitely the best you’ve written so far and I enjoyed reading this. Usually I skip out on 16 line battles but this was worth it. You had only 1 clear miss tbh and that’s rare in these battles that are 16 lines

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fraud ass alias. its a fucking joke that ur here
& i could give a fuck about Black Thoughts: Fgt, you never even been CLOSE to Premier
damn this was nice
bih talking shit like i wont slap the lies from your mouth
ull only give me a run for MY money when i make u hit the atm & withdraw ur Entire account
ok
tryna preach that BS. u can get slumped if u stupid
Sit Down or that Stick'll lead to Chalk: & its not a teachers introduction to Students
nah lol
full clip no Halfpipe. cause theres no more rounds in the Kimber
u can catch that 'K off the Jump': & its no Tony Hawk challenge my nigga
alright
open up blinds? ur sole identifying traits'll get left on the glass
'Act up & then ur Principal at the Window' like he walked by n checked on the class
i hope people get this line cause it’s fire. I can see it going over heads tho. Good shit
Listen kid. im w/ the shits like your peewee's diaper.
Throw you in the Trunk & 'Put a Hole in it Just to See'...: bich, Im the D.C Sniper
alright pretty cool
I hustle bitch. u just make up work like u missed an assignment
Run that Lip,Stick'll spell out Murder: - thats the Kid from the Shining
niceeee
Shoot w/ no conscious. leave u in tune w/ the darkness
Say a Few Words & that Torch'll send you on your way like a Viking funeral process
alright

Jabari
3 Haymakers (1 barely made it)
3 Ok
1 Decent
1 Miss

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Muff
3 Haymakers
4 Ok
1 Miss


This was a dope ass battle. Props to Jabari for dropping that fire and props to Muff for dropping as well, even tho he been whining a lot lately. Really close and hard to decide but I have Muff taking it with a tad bit more of a better verse overall. Props to Both.


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