Lyric Olympics: Aero [champ] vs. Cred - OPEN FOR VOTES

Diablo · 01-06-2018, 07:41 AM

Okay all accusatory bullshit aside for the minute, I don't believe Cred bit and it wasn't even the best line in his verse so let's be real about that. The concepts old and most likely played by now having been used a few times and unless something is pretty much word for word I'm prepared to give the benefit of the doubt.

Cred had a dope opening line with the shoot Aero first ish. Even if the whole Arrow/Aero things been done, it was worded well enough to come off strongly. The pop your moms was okay, maybe an old idea now but despite all the bullshit going on in this thread it wasn't even that great a line and certainly not Cred's best even in this verse. The Friday concept was straight but again might be a little played out now. I still liked it. Largely due to the wording. Long 22 was kinda cool because of it being board relevant and current but I didn't find it as creative as the others that proceeded it so it felt like it lacked that added oompf to it even though it was more comedic I guess. Closer again was straight but lacked something. It had a visual imagery but not enough done with it to make it really have the impact it needed IMO.

Aero: Your verse read more like a swag and flow joint to me again this week, Christmas Story was nice, Guns Barc was funny as fuck to me, it reminded me of Frac's swag in battles to be honest and was worded very cleanly too. Dropping everything to see you was nasty. The setup was wack though to me, LOL @ melt you. That took away a little from it for me. Finishing touches was weaker, probably played at this point too in truth but I wasn't feeling that one. Smith machine closer been done as well tbh, both you guys seemed to tail off somewhat toward the end. Both had some heaters. This is close actually. I think I'd edge it to Aero for consistency.

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01-06-2018, 07:41 AM	#1
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,634 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685552	Okay all accusatory bullshit aside for the minute, I don't believe Cred bit and it wasn't even the best line in his verse so let's be real about that. The concepts old and most likely played by now having been used a few times and unless something is pretty much word for word I'm prepared to give the benefit of the doubt. Cred had a dope opening line with the shoot Aero first ish. Even if the whole Arrow/Aero things been done, it was worded well enough to come off strongly. The pop your moms was okay, maybe an old idea now but despite all the bullshit going on in this thread it wasn't even that great a line and certainly not Cred's best even in this verse. The Friday concept was straight but again might be a little played out now. I still liked it. Largely due to the wording. Long 22 was kinda cool because of it being board relevant and current but I didn't find it as creative as the others that proceeded it so it felt like it lacked that added oompf to it even though it was more comedic I guess. Closer again was straight but lacked something. It had a visual imagery but not enough done with it to make it really have the impact it needed IMO. Aero: Your verse read more like a swag and flow joint to me again this week, Christmas Story was nice, Guns Barc was funny as fuck to me, it reminded me of Frac's swag in battles to be honest and was worded very cleanly too. Dropping everything to see you was nasty. The setup was wack though to me, LOL @ melt you. That took away a little from it for me. Finishing touches was weaker, probably played at this point too in truth but I wasn't feeling that one. Smith machine closer been done as well tbh, both you guys seemed to tail off somewhat toward the end. Both had some heaters. This is close actually. I think I'd edge it to Aero for consistency.