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ill nik-A 12-22-2017 09:38 AM

Lyric Olympics: Aero [champ] vs. Cred - OPEN FOR VOTES
 
Where the winner/ champion decides the following week’s format.

Rules:
Participants will get an invite via PM and must respond within 24 hours or I’m moving on to the next.

This will all take place in the discussion forum. Matches, verses and votes.

If you no-show you’ll be banned from the Discussion forum. NO EXCUSES. You accept this when you agree to battle.

Votes should have a brief explanation but I’ll take what we can get to keep things moving.

Line limit is 20 (but i'm flexible)
First to 5 votes (must win by two)


Verses due Wed at 12am ET.
Votes due by Friday at 12am ET.



Format champion chose: Gun bar battle

@Aero
@Cred

Aero 12-23-2017 02:19 PM

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Cred 12-23-2017 04:20 PM

Cash.

Aero 12-27-2017 10:07 PM

Cred said he needed the ext. granted.

ill nik-A 12-28-2017 03:35 PM

Extension granted

ill nik-A 12-29-2017 05:34 AM

Yo it’s the holidays and I rather a battle than no battle. Are u both good to show if I push this to Monday?
@Aero @Cred

Aero 12-29-2017 06:25 AM

Cool w me but he has to respond

Cred 01-02-2018 01:01 AM

LET ME TALK MY SHIT!
 
Copy my style? Then really act is if u’ll win?!
Bitch I’m HIM! Gun bar king shooting Aero 1st like an Indian
I’ll pop ur baby in the air like u tryna find out the new gender
To clever. Find where relatives live n Pop ur Mom like Bruce Jenner
Heat’ll turn ur toupee to a slick perm. Drum wit the grips firm
Catchem on a Friday n put 50 rounds to his head like Big Worm
I’m a killa @ short bar nigga but in real life I’ll let the pump spray 1st
Long 22 in ur face got this shit looking like a @Gunplay verse
A menace to society. Wit the 40 I’m O-Dog I like drama
Shoot this Chinese bitch in his face like.. “Whatchu say bout my momma?!”




http://i66.tinypic.com/qr0y7d.gif

Aero 01-02-2018 07:13 AM

He's not showing.


December 25th

Run in ya house unwrapping presents like "these gifts are for me"
I blow with the gun, pole on your tongue, this is your Christmas story
I do damage with new ammo, rapid fire leave dudes rattled
My guns bark - they bruise marrow, your guns barc - they lose battles
Cant hide - bullets break down walls, doors, you appear & I melt you
Funny, I'm dropping everything to see you without clearing my schedule
Bullets paint a masterpiece, a live body diminishes nothing
Firm hands over your nose & mouth for 8 mins, I call it the finishing touches
Heard you sell drugs, with the desert eagle I'm getting to him
I pull up with weight on the line that's a machine assist at the gym

Hawk 01-02-2018 09:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 632235)
Copy my style? Then really act is if u’ll win?!
Bitch I’m HIM! Gun bar king shooting Aero 1st like an Indian

^^^ I feel like this was kind of a waste punch. I really liked the punch but the setup and everything was boring

I’ll pop ur baby in the air like u tryna find out the new gender
To clever. Find where relatives live n Pop ur Mom like Bruce Jenner

^^^ the word "new" threw me off in the setup. Seemed a bit forced since a gender reveal party isn't the "new" gender, it's just the gender. Punch was fire though.

Heat’ll turn ur toupee to a slick perm. Drum wit the grips firm
Catchem on a Friday n put 50 rounds to his head like Big Worm

^^^ Fucked with this. Dope

I’m a killa @ short bar nigga but in real life I’ll let the pump spray 1st
Long 22 in ur face got this shit looking like a @Gunplay verse

^^^ Nasty (It's still fuck @Gunplay for life though)

A menace to society. Wit the 40 I’m O-Dog I like drama
Shoot this Chinese bitch in his face like.. “Whatchu say bout my momma?!”

^^^ lmao nice closer



http://i66.tinypic.com/qr0y7d.gif


Overall - A couple of the setups left me wanting more, but the punches typically made up for them. No real misses, and a couple dope hits.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero (Post 632239)
He's not showing.


December 25th

Aero in your house, barrel in your mouth like "these gifts are for me"
I blow with the gun, pole on your tongue, this is your Christmas story

^^^ This felt too... busy... not sure what blow with the gun means. To me it reads as if you're a bad shot. The "pole on your tongue/christmas story" party was fire even though I've never heard a barrel called a pole. (Unless you're talking about a blow gun, which is weird)

I do damage with new ammo, rapid fire leave dudes rattled
My guns bark - they bruise marrow, your guns barc - they lose battles

^^^ Deaddddddddddddddddd LOTB so far

Cant hide - bullets break down walls, doors, you appear & I melt you
Funny, I'm dropping everything to see you without clearing my schedule

^^^ dope

my gun paints a masterpiece, a live body diminishes nothing
A firm hand over your nose and mouth for 8 mins, I call that the finishing touches

^^^ Meh. Not bad but could have been executed a bit better

Heard you sell drugs, with the desert eagle I'm getting to him
I pull up with weight on the line that's a machine assist at the gym

^^^ Not really feeling this


Overall - You had a couple really nasty lines, including imo the LOTB. But you also missed a couple. You always lead into the punch well and then it kind of fell flat.



I think Aero's haymakers were meaner than Cred's, but Cred never really missed. Pretty close but have to go with Cred for having a consistent verse all the way through.

Schadenfreude 01-02-2018 02:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 632235)
Copy my style? Then really act is if u’ll win?!
Bitch I’m HIM! Gun bar king shooting Aero 1st like an Indian
Weak opener
I’ll pop ur baby in the air like u tryna find out the new gender
To clever. Find where relatives live n Pop ur Mom like Bruce Jenner
This is nice
Heat’ll turn ur toupee to a slick perm. Drum wit the grips firm
Catchem on a Friday n put 50 rounds to his head like Big Worm
DOPE
I’m a killa @ short bar nigga but in real life I’ll let the pump spray 1st
Long 22 in ur face got this shit looking like a Gunplay verse
Lol I like this
A menace to society. Wit the 40 I’m O-Dog I like drama
Shoot this Chinese bitch in his face like.. “Whatchu say bout my momma?!”
Decent, nothing crazy

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero (Post 632239)

Aero in your house, barrel in your mouth like "these gifts are for me"
I blow with the gun, pole on your tongue, this is your Christmas story
Execution hurt a dope concept
I do damage with new ammo, rapid fire leave dudes rattled
My guns bark - they bruise marrow, your guns barc - they lose battles
Damn..lmao
Cant hide - bullets break down walls, doors, you appear & I melt you
Funny, I'm dropping everything to see you without clearing my schedule
Decent
my gun paints a masterpiece, a live body diminishes nothing
A firm hand over your nose and mouth for 8 mins, I call that the finishing touches
Dope
Heard you sell drugs, with the desert eagle I'm getting to him
I pull up with weight on the line that's a machine assist at the gym
Decent

Close asf, I could give it to Aero for having LOTB or to Cred for consistency..overall I'll give the edge to CRED.

Barcotic 01-02-2018 03:18 PM

Copy my style? Then really act is if u’ll win?!
Bitch I’m HIM! Gun bar king shooting Aero 1st like an Indian
^dope

I’ll pop ur baby in the air like u tryna find out the new gender
To clever. Find where relatives live n Pop ur Mom like Bruce Jenner
^ehh

Heat’ll turn ur toupee to a slick perm. Drum wit the grips firm
Catchem on a Friday n put 50 rounds to his head like Big Worm
^nah

I’m a killa @ short bar nigga but in real life I’ll let the pump spray 1st
Long 22 in ur face got this shit looking like a Gunplay verse
^fire

A menace to society. Wit the 40 I’m O-Dog I like drama
Shoot this Chinese bitch in his face like.. “Whatchu say bout my momma?!”
^corny

vs

Aero in your house, barrel in your mouth like "these gifts are for me"
I blow with the gun, pole on your tongue, this is your Christmas story
^lacking

I do damage with new ammo, rapid fire leave dudes rattled
My guns bark - they bruise marrow, your guns barc - they lose battles
^cool concept but dont make much sense considering i win most battles & beat everyone in the nbl including urself

Cant hide - bullets break down walls, doors, you appear & I melt you
Funny, I'm dropping everything to see you without clearing my schedule
^light af

my gun paints a masterpiece, a live body diminishes nothing
A firm hand over your nose and mouth for 8 mins, I call that the finishing touches
^slick

Heard you sell drugs, with the desert eagle I'm getting to him
I pull up with weight on the line that's a machine assist at the gym
^OK

hmm
cool shit, pretty damn close but IMO consistency wins it in such a short batt
v/Aero

Geno 01-03-2018 05:32 AM

You ddnt have to count this. I aint going into deep explanation..
Cred had bar of the battle imo with the indian shooting aero lines. Maybe played in concept but thought it was pretty dope with execution. Unfortunately that all he had tho..

Other than that i think aero came a little more consistent and while not as dope as creds one bar was he still hit a couple more times than cred and was able to edge for that alone. Had cred have gone a little more impactful woth just one more bar he coulda stole this shit easy. But to the contrary imo. Good shit

V/aero.

Take it or leave it.

ill nik-A 01-03-2018 05:26 PM

2-2

Votes!!!!

Aero 01-03-2018 05:35 PM

Who put Aero hang it up?

Come forward.

For Battling 01-03-2018 10:15 PM

Location: Chi-Raq
Posts: 1,086
Battle Record: 53-24

Accomplishments
- Gun Bar King



Rep Power: 65063291
Cred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant futureCred has a brilliant future
Default LET ME TALK MY SHIT!
ok ok got the lil profile intro goin on, I dig it
Copy my style? Then really act is if u’ll win?!
Bitch I’m HIM! Gun bar king shooting Aero 1st like an Indian
nice s&f feel. I liked it
I’ll pop ur baby in the air like u tryna find out the new gender
To clever. Find where relatives live n Pop ur Mom like Bruce Jenner
idk..not bad but..sus....Aeros sig
Heat’ll turn ur toupee to a slick perm. Drum wit the grips firm
Catchem on a Friday n put 50 rounds to his head like Big Worm
cool
I’m a killa @ short bar nigga but in real life I’ll let the pump spray 1st
Long 22 in ur face got this shit looking like a @Gunplay verse
lol alright
A menace to society. Wit the 40 I’m O-Dog I like drama
Shoot this Chinese bitch in his face like.. “Whatchu say bout my momma?!”
nah felt this was corny

Vs

Dec. 25

Aero in your house, barrel in your mouth like "these gifts are for me"
I blow with the gun, pole on your tongue, this is your Christmas story
wording and execution hurt this
I do damage with new ammo, rapid fire leave dudes rattled
My guns bark - they bruise marrow, your guns barc - they lose battles
lmaooo although not ENTIRELY true, this shit made me lol. Nice bar
Cant hide - bullets break down walls, doors, you appear & I melt you
Funny, I'm dropping everything to see you without clearing my schedule
yea this is decent
my gun paints a masterpiece, a live body diminishes nothing
A firm hand over your nose and mouth for 8 mins, I call that the finishing touches
this is good
Heard you sell drugs, with the desert eagle I'm getting to him
I pull up with weight on the line that's a machine assist at the gym
this was ok, light

Pretty close, I have aero taking it slightly

Vote Aero

BROKE LESNAR 01-03-2018 11:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 632235)
Copy my style? Then really act is if u’ll win?!
Bitch I’m HIM! Gun bar king shooting Aero 1st like an Indian

☆ played nameflip, low quality bar altogether

I’ll pop ur baby in the air like u tryna find out the new gender
To clever. Find where relatives live n Pop ur Mom like Bruce Jenner

☆ played

Heat’ll turn ur toupee to a slick perm. Drum wit the grips firm
Catchem on a Friday n put 50 rounds to his head like Big Worm

☆ at somepoint we have to come to the realization that friday concepts are played

I’m a killa @ short bar nigga but in real life I’ll let the pump spray 1st
Long 22 in ur face got this shit looking like a @Gunplay verse

☆☆☆☆☆

A menace to society. Wit the 40 I’m O-Dog I like drama
Shoot this Chinese bitch in his face like.. “Whatchu say bout my momma?!”

☆ a friday AND menace to society bar? roflz wtf




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Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero (Post 632239)
He's not showing.


December 25th

Aero in your house, barrel in your mouth like "these gifts are for me"
I blow with the gun, pole on your tongue, this is your Christmas story



I do damage with new ammo, rapid fire leave dudes rattled
My guns bark - they bruise marrow, your guns barc - they lose battles



Cant hide - bullets break down walls, doors, you appear & I melt you
Funny, I'm dropping everything to see you without clearing my schedule

☆☆☆☆☆

my gun paints a masterpiece, a live body diminishes nothing
A firm hand over your nose and mouth for 8 mins, I call that the finishing touches



Heard you sell drugs, with the desert eagle I'm getting to him
I pull up with weight on the line that's a machine assist at the gym


Okay. First off, 10 lines was a fucking joke, but after reading both verses I'm glad they didn't go any further. This was a terrible battle. I thought Cred's misses were worse off than Aero's, and that's the only reason I'm voting for Aero.

v-Aero

WRATH 01-04-2018 08:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 632235)
Copy my style? Then really act is if u’ll win?!
Bitch I’m HIM! Gun bar king shooting Aero 1st like an Indian

Lil lazy

I’ll pop ur baby in the air like u tryna find out the new gender
To clever. Find where relatives live n Pop ur Mom like Bruce Jenner

Aeros sway hurts this but it's new to me

Heat’ll turn ur toupee to a slick perm. Drum wit the grips firm
Catchem on a Friday n put 50 rounds to his head like Big Worm

Had heat would of liked to see a cleaner finish

I’m a killa @ short bar nigga but in real life I’ll let the pump spray 1st
Long 22 in ur face got this shit looking like a @Gunplay verse

Lol okay

A menace to society. Wit the 40 I’m O-Dog I like drama
Shoot this Chinese bitch in his face like.. “Whatchu say bout my momma?!”

Okay


Run in ya house unwrapping presents like "these gifts are for me"fat wife
I blow with the gun, pole on your tongue, this is your Christmas story

Lol okay

I do damage with new ammo, rapid fire leave dudes rattled
My guns bark - they bruise marrow, your guns barc - they lose battlesfat wife

Cool concept, clean wording

Cant hide - bullets break down walls, doors, you appear & I melt you
Funny, I'm dropping everything to see you without clearing my schedule

Not bad a little too subtle for my tastes

Bullets paint a masterpiece, a live body diminishes nothing
Firm hands over your nose & mouth for 8 mins, those are the finishing touches

Eh

Heard you sell drugs, with the desert eagle I'm getting to him
I pull up with weight on the line that's a machine assist at the gym

Nah


V cred

ill nik-A 01-05-2018 09:14 AM

4-3

Votes!!!

Witty 01-05-2018 08:45 PM

I have Aero by a clear margin...I'm not breaking it down and I don't care if this is counted or not.

I like Cred and I think he's good at text, but Aero killed him.


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