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it was decent between them both but felt like it was lacking something for a song, maybe a bridge or something from the verses going into the chorus? i dont really think the hook and the verses worked well together as a TRACK nahmean also it may be just me but the vocals at the end of his shit sounded clipped lol anyway, this is a marked improvement from his stuff of late (to me). i liked it even if its not something i'd prolly bump repeatedly. i dont feel like the hook alone is strong enough for it to lead as first single off the album either, but maybe it will grow on me.
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