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05-19-2013, 05:25 PM
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Om
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Usually I dont give a fuck about the spelling, but yours made it hard to understand some lines. This was ok , I'd say work on your concepts first and foremost. And write longer pieces bro, honestly something like this shouldve went in the cypher section
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