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04-04-2016, 12:12 AM
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Read more like a poem than an open mic, it didn't really have anything to make it standout as a piece. Just real bland, work on imagery and vocabulary to paint more vibrant pictures and give the reader something to be in awe about.
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