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Death of a King
Lived the life of a King,put his heart out with dreams.
God will protect his Achievements will never be forgotten Had ambition & passion they excepted his weakness but he manged to survived It's a shame that he gone but we gotta move & make it far. been fighting battles but he was angle Success through pain. |
someone Nom this for the HOF now..
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Read more like a poem than an open mic, it didn't really have anything to make it standout as a piece. Just real bland, work on imagery and vocabulary to paint more vibrant pictures and give the reader something to be in awe about.
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I'm more of a poet head, thanks for feedback.
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