03-20-2016, 02:27 PM | #1 |
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Strange vs Blam Newton - BLAM NEWTON WINS
NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Strange @Blam Newton |
03-20-2016, 09:45 PM | #2 |
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03-22-2016, 10:56 AM | #3 |
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03-24-2016, 01:28 PM | #4 |
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This fool gettin run thru. If u boys w/ Blam, thats for u too
I'm Kid Cudi when it get ugly, I'll get him n everyone dat knew New Actin like he top tier comp, he gon' learn my punch gruesome He talk a big game but I'll drop some "OOOHH" lines n crush Newton U duckin me like u owe dough, its clear ur becomin a bitch... So its fitting u named urself after a dude known for running from hits. U the glass jaw type, so fuck a punch, I know something better Give u cement shoes, then let u sink til it implodes from the pressure Just bein honest kid, I got the hardest shit n stay droppin hits U not legit, my gun's goin POW! n u see Blam in a box, no comic strips blah, felt like keying something |
03-24-2016, 08:40 PM | #5 |
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You'll get robbed and left on the floor bro with holes in your torso.
I'll having you needing a Doctor, Strange when it comes to Mordu. I know your size is the reason you catch a lot flack, can't go a minute without a snack. I guess Jerry lawler isn't the only King we know on the verge of having a heart attack. There's nothing but shooters where I'm from, we'll empty clips if you're talkin'. Going against me is Suicide, King and we won't even leave Christopher Walken. My hood is real, even when I put out the trash I gotta wear the strap. I'll let clap, put it to your grill and rearrange your face like that MSQRD app. I'm on some violent shit, I'm choosing bats or I'm using gats. The semis got beams on em, so the lasers on your skin aren't for removing tats. |
03-24-2016, 11:04 PM | #6 |
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This fool gettin run thru. If u boys w/ Blam, thats for u too
I'm Kid Cudi when it get ugly, I'll get him n everyone dat knew New alright Actin like he top tier comp, he gon' learn my punch gruesome He talk a big game but I'll drop some "OOOHH" lines n crush Newton not feelin this, maybe it went over my head but idk U duckin me like u owe dough, its clear ur becomin a bitch... So its fitting u named urself after a dude known for running from hits. ok not bad U the glass jaw type, so fuck a punch, I know something better Give u cement shoes, then let u sink til it implodes from the pressure ehhhhh Just bein honest kid, I got the hardest shit n stay droppin hits U not legit, my gun's goin POW! n u see Blam in a box, no comic strips this was cool Vs You'll get robbed and left on the floor bro with holes in your torso. I'll having you needing a Doctor, Strange when it comes to Mordu. the concept was there but wording and execution was weird I know your size is the reason you catch a lot flack, can't go a minute without a snack. I guess Jerry lawler isn't the only King we know on the verge of having a heart attack. hmm ok I'll give you this one There's nothing but shooters where I'm from, we'll empty clips if you're talkin'. Going against me is Suicide, King and we won't even leave Christopher Walken. chris walken wp is old, decent concept My hood is real, even when I put out the trash I gotta wear the strap. I'll let clap, put it to your grill and rearrange your face like that MSQRD app. nah, u been forgetting words in your lines I've noticed I'm on some violent shit, I'm choosing bats or I'm using gats. The semis got beams on em, so the lasers on your skin aren't for removing tats. cool closer This was close. Felt like both of you rushed this week cause you both had a lot of good stuff last week. Strange edges this IMO, could go either way. Vote Strange |
03-25-2016, 03:27 PM | #7 |
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For such a short verse, this read as rushed, lazy in both wording & punch impact.
versus Like yo opponent, your wording read as if u just keyed & posted w/o editing/rewrites. Overall I edge this one to BLAM NEWTON, tho both were below their own standards, Blam was slightly better. Last edited by Schadenfreude; 03-26-2016 at 04:06 PM. |
03-25-2016, 06:01 PM | #8 |
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Strange had an ok verse, a couple peaks, a cpl valleys - liked Newton and comic
Blam wording helped carry plus the variety and clean execution I liked Spp, King lines.. Vote Blam |
03-26-2016, 08:55 AM | #9 |
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U duckin me like u owe dough, its clear ur becomin a bitch...
So its fitting u named urself after a dude known for running from hits. Just bein honest kid, I got the hardest shit n stay droppin hits U not legit, my gun's goin POW! n u see Blam in a box, no comic strips vs There's nothing but shooters where I'm from, we'll empty clips if you're talkin'. Going against me is Suicide, King and we won't even leave Christopher Walken. Heart attack/king was borderline quotable. Cool short battle here. Strange barely edges this one here imo. Vote - Strange |
03-28-2016, 07:52 AM | #10 |
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03-28-2016, 08:01 AM | #11 |
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Strange: glass jaw, closer
Newton: Jerry the King, MSWRD, closer Some decent lines for both, but blam squeeked it. Vote=Blam |
03-28-2016, 11:05 AM | #13 |
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Okay. Thanks for not complaining man.
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