Netcees - Strange vs Blam Newton

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Strange vs Blam Newton - BLAM NEWTON WINS

NBL Season 9

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@Strange @Blam Newton

@Blam Newton

U showing or no?

This fool gettin run thru. If u boys w/ Blam, thats for u too
I'm Kid Cudi when it get ugly, I'll get him n everyone dat knew New
Actin like he top tier comp, he gon' learn my punch gruesome
He talk a big game but I'll drop some "OOOHH" lines n crush Newton
U duckin me like u owe dough, its clear ur becomin a bitch...
So its fitting u named urself after a dude known for running from hits.
U the glass jaw type, so fuck a punch, I know something better
Give u cement shoes, then let u sink til it implodes from the pressure
Just bein honest kid, I got the hardest shit n stay droppin hits
U not legit, my gun's goin POW! n u see Blam in a box, no comic strips

blah, felt like keying something

You'll get robbed and left on the floor bro with holes in your torso.
I'll having you needing a Doctor, Strange when it comes to Mordu.
I know your size is the reason you catch a lot flack, can't go a minute without a snack.
I guess Jerry lawler isn't the only King we know on the verge of having a heart attack.
There's nothing but shooters where I'm from, we'll empty clips if you're talkin'.
Going against me is Suicide, King and we won't even leave Christopher Walken.
My hood is real, even when I put out the trash I gotta wear the strap.
I'll let clap, put it to your grill and rearrange your face like that MSQRD app.
I'm on some violent shit, I'm choosing bats or I'm using gats.
The semis got beams on em, so the lasers on your skin aren't for removing tats.

This fool gettin run thru. If u boys w/ Blam, thats for u too
I'm Kid Cudi when it get ugly, I'll get him n everyone dat knew New
alright
Actin like he top tier comp, he gon' learn my punch gruesome
He talk a big game but I'll drop some "OOOHH" lines n crush Newton
not feelin this, maybe it went over my head but idk
U duckin me like u owe dough, its clear ur becomin a bitch...
So its fitting u named urself after a dude known for running from hits.
ok not bad
U the glass jaw type, so fuck a punch, I know something better
Give u cement shoes, then let u sink til it implodes from the pressure
ehhhhh
Just bein honest kid, I got the hardest shit n stay droppin hits
U not legit, my gun's goin POW! n u see Blam in a box, no comic strips
this was cool

Vs

You'll get robbed and left on the floor bro with holes in your torso.
I'll having you needing a Doctor, Strange when it comes to Mordu.
the concept was there but wording and execution was weird
I know your size is the reason you catch a lot flack, can't go a minute without a snack.
I guess Jerry lawler isn't the only King we know on the verge of having a heart attack.
hmm ok I'll give you this one
There's nothing but shooters where I'm from, we'll empty clips if you're talkin'.
Going against me is Suicide, King and we won't even leave Christopher Walken.
chris walken wp is old, decent concept
My hood is real, even when I put out the trash I gotta wear the strap.
I'll let clap, put it to your grill and rearrange your face like that MSQRD app.
nah, u been forgetting words in your lines I've noticed
I'm on some violent shit, I'm choosing bats or I'm using gats.
The semis got beams on em, so the lasers on your skin aren't for removing tats.
cool closer

This was close. Felt like both of you rushed this week cause you both had a lot of good stuff last week. Strange edges this IMO, could go either way.

Vote Strange

Quote:

Originally Posted by Strange (Post 575190)

Newton running & closer.

For such a short verse, this read as rushed, lazy in both wording & punch impact.

versus

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blam Newton (Post 575235)

Jerry Lawler & Chris Walken.

Like yo opponent, your wording read as if u just keyed & posted w/o editing/rewrites.

Overall I edge this one to BLAM NEWTON, tho both were below their own standards, Blam was slightly better.

Strange had an ok verse, a couple peaks, a cpl valleys - liked Newton and comic

Blam wording helped carry plus the variety and clean execution
I liked Spp, King lines..

Vote Blam

U duckin me like u owe dough, its clear ur becomin a bitch...
So its fitting u named urself after a dude known for running from hits.
Just bein honest kid, I got the hardest shit n stay droppin hits
U not legit, my gun's goin POW! n u see Blam in a box, no comic strips

vs

There's nothing but shooters where I'm from, we'll empty clips if you're talkin'.
Going against me is Suicide, King and we won't even leave Christopher Walken.

Heart attack/king was borderline quotable. Cool short battle here. Strange barely edges this one here imo.

Vote - Strange

Strange: glass jaw, closer
Newton: Jerry the King, MSWRD, closer

Some decent lines for both, but blam squeeked it.
Vote=Blam

@Orc i'm ok with u closing this. dude didn't check that was meant to be a no show verse.

Okay. Thanks for not complaining man.