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01-11-2016, 09:57 PM
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SYRACUSE
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Inno you brought some lulz but it was basically more of a loose sex metaphor than a real written. Feel like you keyed this.
Razah brought some heat into a small verse. Nice switch up to the rhyme at the beginning, a hint of early braggadocio then an intricate connection to the topic. I was more enthralled with this verse than Inno's. V/ razah
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