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10-22-2015, 11:21 PM
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Mic Check
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
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cool shit. u know what ur doing. u have ur style, shits easy for u
the scheme going all the way through was cool, ive seen u do it plenty of times. lots of imagery, great vocab but not too much as to take the reader out of it. impressive stuff i also liked how the title could actually start the verse and then work with the whole scheme. different.cool. original. skittles and barstools bitches and harpoons i live in a harsh truth that this is an art phewf! i see u, bish.
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