Week 8: Flo Real 0-0 vs. Frank 0-0 - [FRANK 7-0]

Nigma · 09-17-2015, 07:55 PM

Flo, cool concept. Incorporated the phrase in there naturally and took a linear approach to the topic. Nothing really stood out as either above or below average and it felt like a safe play overall. I feel it required more of a 'full circle' feel at the end, or just something extra to shine.. If that makes sense. Solid showing regardless

Frank, you posted a day late, overwrote the shit outta your opponent and your relation to the topic was a gigantic stretch, but the writing was still very good. Wording was crisp, imagery was strong. The bit about guts with fur stood out. It pains me to vote for you like this but you clearly had the more enjoyable verse here

+1 Frank

09-17-2015, 07:55 PM	#11
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Flo, cool concept. Incorporated the phrase in there naturally and took a linear approach to the topic. Nothing really stood out as either above or below average and it felt like a safe play overall. I feel it required more of a 'full circle' feel at the end, or just something extra to shine.. If that makes sense. Solid showing regardless Frank, you posted a day late, overwrote the shit outta your opponent and your relation to the topic was a gigantic stretch, but the writing was still very good. Wording was crisp, imagery was strong. The bit about guts with fur stood out. It pains me to vote for you like this but you clearly had the more enjoyable verse here +1 Frank __________________

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