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Join Date: Mar 2013
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.. ARt: Lol, internet connection line vs flexs pretty much.. Not many connections Gamble's got this easy knuckle: after the fight, rear naked was ok vs drag was eh bad wording all around, mediocre concepts but vince had better attempts v/vince Bleak: after the fight vs. on the block best lines from both, Vince also had rear naked choke that was decent. Really close, I could go either way, but i enjoyed Vince's verse more v/Vince Sharp Nine: Opener, street boss, overall wack V Nothing really Walt bodied Tony tbh. He got it pretty easily V/Walter Allen: You're both skinny as fuck. Prolly got AIDS...but who can blame ya Sex for you two was like rubbing sticks together...it's no wonder Snoop's a flamer The Grandpa goes after chicks...when he tries they lose a few tears Trust me...Anne Frank wasn't the only girl to hide from you for two years Vs when you say your underground, its not cause of unpublicized rap tours, its cause at the first sight of a german, you hide under the floor boards/ V/Knucklehead grandparents, snoops grandparents verse had some good concepts but the wording came off weak tbh i think knucks grandparents took this by a little imo, cool battle Split: notsureifsrs Snoops grandparents had an okay line in there, I am sure. Knuckleheads grandparents were not much better but definitely connected more of all fronts. Better wording. A little corny. Doesn't matter, ethered V/Knucks grandparents ... OK so you prolly think there is nothing wrong with that.. yall just qouted there verse.. and said one thing about the actual verse.. ie.. concept is good concept is bad concept is constant constant is concept.. The rest of the shit is just like "ohh didnt feel it.." ............... Are You ready.. IAMBENT: Knuck's - Funny, relevant, personal, and pretty dope.. I like the style too,easy to read. Snoops - Wow some funny lines in here, the closer was nice, but the opener was not so great, but understated in an original way. I think snoop's was more original but Knuck's was harder hitting. Vote -Knuck's Grandparents CEREAL: Kim - this was sick, well structured with a good rhythm to it.. Knowledge of opponent and just all round nice.. That union line was ill :) John - dude this was cool, i mean you had standard anonymous punchlines that where cool, some witty wordplay.. but no personals, not one.. But your style was still cool.. vote = kimJong Un BUDDAH: Obama had the screaming at church line which was pretty funny and the head to toe line was good. Al Qaeda had unemployment line and the 7 cousins line was lotb imo. I gotta give this Al Qaeda though. Their lines hit harder imo. ... If yall seriously just wanted us to quote lines and say they wack.. buddah did that and his name still got brought up..
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