14. Unfukwitable vs 11. ill nik-A - NIK WINS

[Sharp]

Unfukwitable's Verse

He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds;
the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead.
"ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u;
Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals.
Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements;
PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden.
Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit;
In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib.
Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears;
I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there!

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

got that natural salt & pepper look; bitches stare, like & touch it
while Ron Burgundy could be the color commentator for ya hair dyin process

Where did this vet learn to rhyme?.. damn, to think I use to respect this man,
Idk how u finished like that!, but I guess "Cliffhangers" are not meant to land.

[Hush]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

The high u got from…
beatin a legend; surpasses any army of chicks in a party of spliffs
robbing me’s ya signature win… since it won’t happen again u stealing sharpies to sniff
this is pretty cool.. the connection is sort of a reach tho bro..its a bit of a stretch to connect a signature to a sharpie, then to snffin it iunno, its cool cuz its creative but its so creative its almost too vague
ur gunplay’s weak; so I’ll deflate ya ego cuz u’ve wronged the style
u don’t have a killer draw… more like Brady’s sketch artist was hired for the Boston Bomber’s trial
this way is better cuz its more straight foward, maybe better is the wrong phrasing, i would of loved this line if u said " u dont gota killer draw some something tom brady artist.. ur handsketchy like tom brady artist.. i know u want to do doubles, and i think that would of been a more realistic double punch, boston bomber just seemed an awkward choice. its still a cool line just trying to give insight on how im looking at these

you don’t know how to word ya punches so to try’s unfair
my wordplay’s the best or in the discussion… u askin how to do it right in there
dope
u swear the Suicide Squad has ya back but as it turns out…
isn’t it Odd… they tagged with others while u got eliminated with him in the 1st round
ok this is cool to, these are simpler so they appeal to me more
u really a scared pussy; so all that gun talk don’t impress son
u show signs of being yellow… & hold on to the walls when u see a slippery when wet one
not feeling this one, really weird way to diss someone. creative tho
I beat the better version of u without rhyming; so u’ll get crushed
if this is sweet revenge for Murda… all I need is a warm glass of milk to kill that Sugar rush
this was really odd way to end the verse. lol i dont even get it.. i mean I get it but wtf this some old man shit lol. no offense big bro but nah this line really really was a hell no moment for me

Originally Posted by Sharp

Unfukwitable's Verse

He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds;
the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead.
the wp and punch here is ok, but the setup really do much to "Set it up" it didnt faciliate the punch, it didnt lead me to the payoff, so it didnt really have a ton of impact
"ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u;
Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals.
not feeling this, when u load the wp up back to back it has to be flawless.. if chromite is a enzyme in the body that runs thru ur blood and causes fear this is the best line ever, if not its a reach..im eating chinese food and im not gonna google this, but im leaning towards no
Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements;
PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden.
this is pretty dope. setup did its thing here everything clicked
Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit;
In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib.
fire
Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears;
I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there!
this was on point


Where did this vet learn to rhyme?.. damn, to think I use to respect this man,
Idk how u finished like that!, but I guess "Cliffhangers" are not meant to land.

Ima keep it 100 when I read this when it was first posted I thought Niks verse was ass lol and I thought Unfuk would get the runaway win. So I took my time and hesitated on a vote. I gave my word I would vote on anybody who votes on a BA battle so here I am. Respect both yall alot. and for different reasons but YO. Unfuk verse actually got worst as I saw it more, while Nik verse got better or atleast held. Iunno verses age funny, and when u read shit multiple times u feel different. Nik has some LOW lows, and Fuk had a consistent steam but some of the wp was awkward to me, where Nik was kinda borderline corny at times he was creative and had the more effective personals. the thing that keeps me wavering is that Nik ended with a really wack closer, whereas Fuk had 3 solid bars closing his verse... that really keeps playing a impact in my mind. Fuk had bad wp that weighed down his first half, where Nik had overly complex angles and some shit I didnt like prefence wise

I literally went back and forth on this multiple times

Nik got creativty but so do Fuk
Nik had 1 fire line I loved and 1 I really didnt like
everything else was avg or above
Fuk had good to ok lines but nothing better than Niks wordplay/discusssion punch because it was a perfectly executed personal. that and the 2 on 2 tag bar really makes a big difference here

Unfuk could have went harder with the I beat u before angle

I think Nik was more sound here and more creative when I really break it down thoroughly.
hardest battle to decide in awhile but I cant fault Nik for dropping bars that I dont stylistically like when they arent bad just different for my taste
Unfuk had wps which I also dont love and the double entrendes werent perfect and that hurt him IMO

i didnt google the chromite definition and it could of been a difference maker but i aint into researching bars
again thats preference

I could be in this thread all night so vote Nik


@Sharp @cntrlf4 need to get that weak ass vote outa here tho

[fraze]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

The high u got from…
beatin a legend; surpasses any army of chicks in a party of spliffs
robbing me’s ya signature win… since it won’t happen again u stealing sharpies to sniff
nice concept but punch is a little bit light because you didn't really set it up
ur gunplay’s weak; so I’ll deflate ya ego cuz u’ve wronged the style
u don’t have a killer draw… more like Brady’s sketch artist was hired for the Boston Bomber’s trial
this is ok. didn't really setup boston bomber well, but this still hits.
you don’t know how to word ya punches so to try’s unfair
my wordplay’s the best or in the discussion… u askin how to do it right in there
slick. nice delivery and personal
u swear the Suicide Squad has ya back but as it turns out…
isn’t it Odd… they tagged with others while u got eliminated with him in the 1st round
also a nice personal
u really a scared pussy; so all that gun talk don’t impress son
u show signs of being yellow… & hold on to the walls when u see a slippery when wet one
not really feeling this tbh
I beat the better version of u without rhyming; so u’ll get crushed
if this is sweet revenge for Murda… all I need is a warm glass of milk to kill that Sugar rush
meh. didn't like this at all

Originally Posted by Sharp

Unfukwitable's Verse

He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds;
the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead.
this is straight. nothing amazing but a solid bar
"ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u;
Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals.
doesn't quite work but i like where you were going with this
Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements;
PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden.
why so much iron(y)? this is light to me
Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit;
In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib.
you could have flipped this different comes off a little statementish but still ok bar
Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears;
I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there!
this is aight, but light
Where did this vet learn to rhyme?.. damn, to think I use to respect this man,
Idk how u finished like that!, but I guess "Cliffhangers" are not meant to land
cool, but prob could have done more with the personal

this was prob the best battle of the week to me. both had their ups and downs but there were some solid bars. nik had a few misses at the end, but discussion and odd were hard. unfuk had jordan and the opener, but those weren't as strong as niks quotes. i don't think his misses weren't bad but the verse didn't have any bars that really stood out to me as amazing.

Vote: ill nik-A