14. Unfukwitable vs 11. ill nik-A - NIK WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 17th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Unfukwitable @ill nik-A

we meet again, 100.


I'm going 12.

Welcome!

@ill nik-A Un sent me 12

The high u got from…
beatin a legend; surpasses any army of chicks in a party of spliffs
robbing me’s ya signature win… since it won’t happen again u stealing sharpies to sniff
ur gunplay’s weak; so I’ll deflate ya ego cuz u’ve wronged the style
u don’t have a killer draw… more like Brady’s sketch artist was hired for the Boston Bomber’s trial
you don’t know how to word ya punches so to try’s unfair
my wordplay’s the best or in the discussion… u askin how to do it right in there
u swear the Suicide Squad has ya back but as it turns out…
isn’t it Odd… they tagged with others while u got eliminated with him in the 1st round
u really a scared pussy; so all that gun talk don’t impress son
u show signs of being yellow… & hold on to the walls when u see a slippery when wet one
I beat the better version of u without rhyming; so u’ll get crushed
if this is sweet revenge for Murda… all I need is a warm glass of milk to kill that Sugar rush

Unfukwitable's Verse

He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds;
the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead.
"ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u;
Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals.
Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements;
PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden.
Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit;
In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib.
Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears;
I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there!

Where did this vet learn to rhyme?.. damn, to think I use to respect this man,
Idk how u finished like that!, but I guess "Cliffhangers" are not meant to land.

V/ nik ....worded better...unfuk was ok up until the throwing fits reference..that's kinda old...nice to see he got better tho...nice battle too

Ima keep it 100 when I read this when it was first posted I thought Niks verse was ass lol and I thought Unfuk would get the runaway win. So I took my time and hesitated on a vote. I gave my word I would vote on anybody who votes on a BA battle so here I am. Respect both yall alot. and for different reasons but YO. Unfuk verse actually got worst as I saw it more, while Nik verse got better or atleast held. Iunno verses age funny, and when u read shit multiple times u feel different. Nik has some LOW lows, and Fuk had a consistent steam but some of the wp was awkward to me, where Nik was kinda borderline corny at times he was creative and had the more effective personals. the thing that keeps me wavering is that Nik ended with a really wack closer, whereas Fuk had 3 solid bars closing his verse... that really keeps playing a impact in my mind. Fuk had bad wp that weighed down his first half, where Nik had overly complex angles and some shit I didnt like prefence wise

I literally went back and forth on this multiple times

Nik got creativty but so do Fuk
Nik had 1 fire line I loved and 1 I really didnt like
everything else was avg or above
Fuk had good to ok lines but nothing better than Niks wordplay/discusssion punch because it was a perfectly executed personal. that and the 2 on 2 tag bar really makes a big difference here

Unfuk could have went harder with the I beat u before angle

I think Nik was more sound here and more creative when I really break it down thoroughly.
hardest battle to decide in awhile but I cant fault Nik for dropping bars that I dont stylistically like when they arent bad just different for my taste
Unfuk had wps which I also dont love and the double entrendes werent perfect and that hurt him IMO

i didnt google the chromite definition and it could of been a difference maker but i aint into researching bars
again thats preference

I could be in this thread all night so vote Nik


@Sharp @cntrlf4 need to get that weak ass vote outa here tho

Killer draw, discussion, odd

Vs.

Chromite (almost), iron maiden, 711

Sorry doin this shit on my phone. Both had some misses, seen wayy better from both. That warm milk thing was ugh, I thought discussion and odd bars was dope. Unfuk had some cool lines, his creativity was nice maybe trying to fit too much in some of them.

V/nika

this was prob the best battle of the week to me. both had their ups and downs but there were some solid bars. nik had a few misses at the end, but discussion and odd were hard. unfuk had jordan and the opener, but those weren't as strong as niks quotes. i don't think his misses weren't bad but the verse didn't have any bars that really stood out to me as amazing.

Vote: ill nik-A

Can you elaborate a bit? few more quotes or something plzzzzz? good to have you back tho

The high u got from…
beatin a legend; surpasses any army of chicks in a party of spliffs
robbing me’s ya signature win… since it won’t happen again u stealing sharpies to sniff
haha I fuck wit this... smooth
ur gunplay’s weak; so I’ll deflate ya ego cuz u’ve wronged the style
u don’t have a killer draw… more like Brady’s sketch artist was hired for the Boston Bomber’s trial
cool but nothin crazy to me though
you don’t know how to word ya punches so to try’s unfair
my wordplay’s the best or in the discussion… u askin how to do it right in there
old school vibe. dope.
u swear the Suicide Squad has ya back but as it turns out…
isn’t it Odd… they tagged with others while u got eliminated with him in the 1st round
this one's pretty good too. simple play but executed nicely wit the personal
u really a scared pussy; so all that gun talk don’t impress son
u show signs of being yellow… & hold on to the walls when u see a slippery when wet one
hahaha... idk I thought that was heat
I beat the better version of u without rhyming; so u’ll get crushed
if this is sweet revenge for Murda… all I need is a warm glass of milk to kill that Sugar rush
damn after all the nice bars you had this one was wack man lol not a good close

vs.

He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds;
the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead.
tough
"ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u;
Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals.
yo I liked that to be honest but why another Cro- play? I seen the 'cro-shade' you did recently so that took away from this one for me
Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements;
PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden.
ehhh aight... didn't connect that well
Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit;
In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib.
haha yea this funny shit
Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears;
I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there!
I think of nik as THEE jordan guy, so the idea was off to me from the jump... not feelin
Where did this vet learn to rhyme?.. damn, to think I use to respect this man,
Idk how u finished like that!, but I guess "Cliffhangers" are not meant to land.
decent angle & concept but needed somethin more in execution... cool though


This was a nice read, both came wit some bars...
Unfuk started wit the nice barnik'll play thought he did that right.
Throwin fits is one you either gon get or breeze by & not realize the play, but I fucked wit that
Already said how I felt about Chromite & closer had potential.
nik-A really had it together this week though... signature win & discussion were heat.
slippery when wet / yellow sign was unorthodox but I thought that was comedy
Odd & Brady sketch were both solid too... closer was a big whiff to me but that was the only one

good shit fellas... nik-A came wit it here though & I got him takin this one

V/ ill nik-A

Sharpies, discussion, 1st round , slippery when wet

Vs

Opener, baby mama, closer

V/Nik ... Battle could have went either way, I got him edging w/ a quote

I came in here to vote because I saw them listed at the top of the forum, BUT I can't view Unfuk's sig pic and after reading ill nik-A's opener, I'm guessing it's a reference to that?

I can maybe vote later once home and the pictures viewable but right now I'm gonna have to leave this one. I hit up the other two open.

If I'm online later, message me and i've got you. @Hush

In the meantime, bumping this to the top for you both.

Pz!

The high u got from…
beatin a legend; surpasses any army of chicks in a party of spliffs
robbing me’s ya signature win… since it won’t happen again u stealing sharpies to sniff

creative. I liked it. Could of been worded for a harder hit though


ur gunplay’s weak; so I’ll deflate ya ego cuz u’ve wronged the style
u don’t have a killer draw… more like Brady’s sketch artist was hired for the Boston Bomber’s trial

Yeah this was quite cool. Liked it

you don’t know how to word ya punches so to try’s unfair
my wordplay’s the best or in the discussion… u askin how to do it right in there

simple and yet the lotb so far

u swear the Suicide Squad has ya back but as it turns out…
isn’t it Odd… they tagged with others while u got eliminated with him in the 1st round

nice

u really a scared pussy; so all that gun talk don’t impress son
u show signs of being yellow… & hold on to the walls when u see a slippery when wet one

meh I didn't really get this tbf

I beat the better version of u without rhyming; so u’ll get crushed
if this is sweet revenge for Murda… all I need is a warm glass of milk to kill that Sugar rush

[B] hmm im getting the concept but I dunno... its worded well enough for what you were going for but I just don't see how this was ever going to sting etc. Maybe I'm missing it. Seemed more swagger

Overall good creativity and some nice hits but dropped off near the end

He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds;
the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead.

first line didn't need to be there. Overall I like the creativity but it could of been better

"ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u;
Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals.

nice this was good

Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements;
PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden.

Yeah this was solid


Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit;
In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib.

I dunno about this

Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears;
I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there!

Yeah ok


Where did this vet learn to rhyme?.. damn, to think I use to respect this man,
Idk how u finished like that!, but I guess "Cliffhangers" are not meant to land.

great close

Overall a nice verse but the odd misses wernt as strong or creative as nik-A but then I preferred your lines where they hit.


Tough match. Which is always a good thing. I got you both with 4 quotable each.

Im going to throw a spanner in the works and vote


Unfuk

I have Nik on this

Faves were the personals.. discussion, odd, slippery

Unfuk, thought bar nik'll was cool, iron maiden was solid...but wasn't feelin you as much as Nik. 7 11s had potential but ended it ehh to me wit the slurpee shit.. Nik, hated that sweet shit too lol...but I felt his verse more, came off harder to me.

V-nika