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Join Date: Jul 2015
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I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro
so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo ---simple yet effective peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd ----cool concept but I didn't like the execution. Coulda been flipped better imho cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer ---nice personal but amen/prayer was too predictable. Shoulda flipped this one too I got the same problem with this verse as I have with all ur verses, u shoulda took the time to flip the lines instead of posting the first one u think up. Still a decent verse but it coulda been oh so much better. Vs. found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch ----nice all the way around bruh u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job ---nice personal I didnt quote made/clean house and behr/paint the walls cause I just seen those concepts used somewhere, they were good flips tho. Overall I got des with three quotes vs creds two but des's were mediocre due to wording whereas creds were nice. Both were consistent but I think cred was more consistent even tho I didn't quote two of his lines that were OK. Good battle. V. Cred |
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