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Old 08-05-2015, 05:31 PM   #11
Mr. J
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so you British? so what merlin u dont flow with a wand
Ill treat you like a Drawbridge. ill leave you Stiff as a Board over the Pond
bitch ill catch u NAPPING. whole bedroom get dumped w/ the K
Ull see that Rocket n itll be a Dream Shake that would Leave Olajuwon fucking amazed
My stuff is just cray. incredible, mind you
When I Ride I Eat Snakes. n the Steel'll Hold you Up like the Pegs on a Mongoose

Rob me? Your ATLAS. we'll set UP w/ the Pound
Coz when them Two Arms Go Up? You better Hold Up. Or ur whole earth comin crumblin down

^^^^^
I thought opening shit was dope as hell, and that Atlas line was smooth
as for the rest they were hit & miss for me, but still pretty decent
but the quoted above were on some slick banana peel bird shit for real
I felt like you kind of stutter stepped here & there but you did work regardless

leave ya house stop dissing everyone take like me n have a kind mouth
see the grass'll be greener on other side if you wern't such a faggot to go outside n find out

u poor as fuck got that gawping look that makes girls want u to leave them alone
if he finding silver in his pocket it's only the twerk vids stored on this stalkers phone
try so hard to set-up bars, but ur service is hard for anyone to get it g
so u can post it fast but that shits not landing till the next day with ya best delivery

^^^^
I thought these concepts were pretty cool, kind of streeeeetched but cool stuff
literally LOL'd at that Silver line though, which was just funny regardless
I feel like I can hear the accent as I read some of your other lines out..
like that cure line? if I'm not mistaken, either way this was a pretty good showing
had a few more misses than Muff but you still put in work which was smooth

v/Muff, I felt like he had some stronger punches that landed better
his concepts seemed bulkier than what Lotto brought to the table
both had some great ideas though, I just feel Muff delivered a stronger showing
Lotto had some funny concepts, I enjoyed that beef/leather strap idea
my only issue was that the wording came off funny and I had to read it a few times
otherwise I felt like if it didn't effect his performance as much as it did this battle would have been pretty close, dope battle fella's
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