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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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You’re kungfugrip’s older bro, can’t help but to laugh at this
That means you were texting backwhen Destroyer was just playing battleship You wack as shit, changed yah name cuz new cats had no respect for yah quotes Now text is back showing signs of life , but nobody checks for a Pulse These old heads keep comin out the woodworks to get woodshopped Give this hippy flashbacks of his dirt performances when I show up with this wood stock ^^^^^^^ this opener and the rest that was quoted was fiiiiiiiiiiire I really enjoyed how you approached this and it was slick as shit what followed was decent but compared to this, it seemed light I really enjoyed that 'Little Brother' line to, some dope work here I heard your dick game is weak.. ya girl said she’s tired of the sex She calls you Hand Sanitizer.. the more you rub it, the drier she gets Plus your faggot set don’t rock - y’all pussies ain’t got your hearts in it For you an’ your crew, I’ll be writin’ more chalk lines than Bart Simpson This Joker is an X-Man, to draw on this cartoon is no trouble I’ll make this comic strip, but on this page, we’ll never see your quotes bubble ^^^^^ this was pretty slick, my only issue was that hearts in it/Bart Simpson the rhyme don't really met up as it does for me unless you got an accent then I can see it working, the draw/comic strip/bubble quotes was slick v/I think I'm going to have to go with Chyeahhhh, his verse seemed more consistent I liked Pinot's verse but that good year line seemed kind of bland to me like you could have worked a better punch in with that I don't fuck with Game of Thrones as much as everyone else, but I felt like that set up and punch was kind of a stretch to make work, the supporting cast line seemed ok, but didn't hit as hard as I'd like it to see either way dope battle
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