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Sharp 07-20-2015 12:01 AM

Chyeahhh!!! 3-4 vs Pinot Grijj 1-0 - CHYEAHHH!!! WINS
 
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Chyeahhh!!! @Pinot Grijj

Chyeahhh!!! 07-23-2015 12:00 AM

You’re kungfugrip’s older bro, can’t help but to laugh at this
That means you were texting backwhen Destroyer was just playing battleship
You wack as shit, changed yah name cuz new cats had no respect for yah quotes
Now text is back showing signs of life , but nobody checks for a Pulse
These old heads keep comin out the woodworks to get woodshopped
Give this hippy flashbacks of his dirt performances when I show up with this wood stock
If Hall of Names was a building, yah spot would be in some god awful place
And the admin would keep movin your name tag further and further off the site …like Office Space
Congrats on champing FN. If I won , I’d play Kar and vacate the title
Competition is none, plus on any given night, weak niggas like you can make the finals
I’m at your door for a truce, and just when you think dangers avoided
I’d slap you!
punch your wife in the face, and hook your kid like a hanger abortion
Im hard as shit, plus my metaphors play hard to get
Suttin like your wife, right before i caught the bitch
If seeing is believing, then yall are blind for believing this dude
Cuz he'll only be mentioned when it comes to little brother, like 9th wonder leaving the group

Pinot Grij 07-23-2015 10:41 PM

Final week.. who is this geek? Ain’t no way you beatin’ me, Sally
You Jon Snow in Game of Thrones, I’ll kill this bastard in the season finale
This’ll be over fast.. you’re no Main Attraction - in a leading role, you’re ass
Since you think you a Star, I’ll break your fuckin neck so you can have a supporting cast
My shotty’ll destroy you, leave a fuckin mess where you stood there, homo
When you get to heaven, it’ll just be a shoe with wings like the Goodyear logo
I heard your dick game is weak.. ya girl said she’s tired of the sex
She calls you Hand Sanitizer.. the more you rub it, the drier she gets
That bitch gave up the pussy tho.. the reality has to hurt you
She took the pipe like the bad kid in an anti-drug commercial
Plus your faggot set don’t rock - y’all pussies ain’t got your hearts in it
For you an’ your crew, I’ll be writin’ more chalk lines than Bart Simpson
This Joker is an X-Man, to draw on this cartoon is no trouble
I’ll make this comic strip, but on this page, we’ll never see your quotes bubble
This the season finale, I ain’t even need to prep to show this geek is just broke
I’m John Oliver, it took me thirty minutes to turn your Last Week into a joke

Ace 07-24-2015 02:07 AM

office space, hanger abortion, fight night

vs

GOT, goodyear, bubble

3 to 3 on fav lines.. the decent lines hit the same to me also so it really comes down to lines i didnt like.. for chyeah check the pulse is played, and the caught the bitch didnt hit at all for me.. pinot had an old supporting cast line and wasnt really feeling anti drug.. pinot's worst was slightly better than chyea's tho imo.. damn this was tough to vote on but

v pinot

Mr. J 07-24-2015 02:35 PM

You’re kungfugrip’s older bro, can’t help but to laugh at this
That means you were texting backwhen Destroyer was just playing battleship
You wack as shit, changed yah name cuz new cats had no respect for yah quotes
Now text is back showing signs of life , but nobody checks for a Pulse
These old heads keep comin out the woodworks to get woodshopped
Give this hippy flashbacks of his dirt performances when I show up with this wood stock

^^^^^^^
this opener and the rest that was quoted was fiiiiiiiiiiire
I really enjoyed how you approached this and it was slick as shit
what followed was decent but compared to this, it seemed light
I really enjoyed that 'Little Brother' line to, some dope work here

I heard your dick game is weak.. ya girl said she’s tired of the sex
She calls you Hand Sanitizer.. the more you rub it, the drier she gets

Plus your faggot set don’t rock - y’all pussies ain’t got your hearts in it
For you an’ your crew, I’ll be writin’ more chalk lines than Bart Simpson
This Joker is an X-Man, to draw on this cartoon is no trouble
I’ll make this comic strip, but on this page, we’ll never see your quotes bubble

^^^^^
this was pretty slick, my only issue was that hearts in it/Bart Simpson
the rhyme don't really met up as it does for me unless you got an accent
then I can see it working, the draw/comic strip/bubble quotes was slick

v/I think I'm going to have to go with Chyeahhhh, his verse seemed more consistent
I liked Pinot's verse but that good year line seemed kind of bland to me
like you could have worked a better punch in with that I don't fuck with Game of Thrones as much as everyone else, but I felt like that set up and punch was kind of a stretch to make work, the supporting cast line seemed ok, but didn't hit as hard as I'd like it to see
either way dope battle

Bash 07-24-2015 09:25 PM

Pulse, hanger, office space

Vs

Goodyear lol, quotes bubble

V/Chyeeah.. Idk why but for some reason I feel like u drop way doper during FN.. Anywho, I give em the edge by a quote. Could really go either way.

Netcees Battle League 07-25-2015 02:41 PM

2-1 Chyeeah more votes pls.

Swerve 07-25-2015 04:15 PM

You wack as shit, changed yah name cuz new cats had no respect for yah quotes
Now text is back showing signs of life , but nobody checks for a Pulse
If Hall of Names was a building, yah spot would be in some god awful place
And the admin would keep movin your name tag further and further off the site …like Office Space
I’m at your door for a truce, and just when you think dangers avoided
I’d slap you!
punch your wife in the face, and hook your kid like a hanger abortion

vs.

My shotty’ll destroy you, leave a fuckin mess where you stood there, homo
When you get to heaven, it’ll just be a shoe with wings like the Goodyear logo
This the season finale, I ain’t even need to prep to show this geek is just broke
I’m John Oliver, it took me thirty minutes to turn your Last Week into a joke


I think Chyeah got this pretty easily even though quotes were close. Not that Pinot was bad, but Chyeah had some heat and a ton of swagger. That hanger abortion line completely got quoted on delivery as its been done tons of times. The other two lines were fire and I was generous in quoting that John Oliver line.

V/ Chyeah

King Karaoke 07-26-2015 12:53 PM

Hi...

You’re kungfugrip’s older bro, can’t help but to laugh at this
That means you were texting backwhen Destroyer was just playing battleship
You wack as shit, changed yah name cuz new cats had no respect for yah quotes
Now text is back showing signs of life , but nobody checks for a Pulse
These old heads keep comin out the woodworks to get woodshopped
Give this hippy flashbacks of his dirt performances when I show up with this wood stock
If Hall of Names was a building, yah spot would be in some god awful place
And the admin would keep movin your name tag further and further off the site …like Office Space
Congrats on champing FN. If I won , I’d play Kar and vacate the title
Competition is none, plus on any given night, weak niggas like you can make the finals
I’m at your door for a truce, and just when you think dangers avoided
I’d slap you!
punch your wife in the face, and hook your kid like a hanger abortion
If seeing is believing, then yall are blind for believing this dude
Cuz he'll only be mentioned when it comes to little brother, like 9th wonder leaving the group

This is probably the best verse ive ever seen from you and probably the best verse Ive read this week...
You should write like this all the time....


My shotty’ll destroy you, leave a fuckin mess where you stood there, homo
When you get to heaven, it’ll just be a shoe with wings like the Goodyear logo
I heard your dick game is weak.. ya girl said she’s tired of the sex
She calls you Hand Sanitizer.. the more you rub it, the drier she gets
That bitch gave up the pussy tho.. the reality has to hurt you
She took the pipe like the bad kid in an anti-drug commercial
Plus your faggot set don’t rock - y’all pussies ain’t got your hearts in it
For you an’ your crew, I’ll be writin’ more chalk lines than Bart Simpson
This Joker is an X-Man, to draw on this cartoon is no trouble
I’ll make this comic strip, but on this page, we’ll never see your quotes bubble

I love your verses but I think the first four lost this for u...
Ive seen a few Jon Snow/game of thrones lines this season...
Supporting cast is an old concept too...
Bart simpson line was fire...
The closer couldve been so dope, Ive been toying with that concept for awhile but havent had an opportunity to use it yet...

I think Chyeaahhh was just too consistent and personal here...

vote- Chyeaahh...

Bye...

Hush 07-26-2015 01:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!! (Post 509749)
You’re kungfugrip’s older bro, can’t help but to laugh at this
That means you were texting backwhen Destroyer was just playing battleship
I understand that exagerations are a staple of punchlines, but I just found this bland and really a reach with no sting. saying he txted a long time is a not a diss. it COULD of been a diss if u twisted it but it just fell flat
You wack as shit, changed yah name cuz new cats had no respect for yah quotes
Now text is back showing signs of life , but nobody checks for a Pulse
dope, I can imagine this being done alot, but who cares. Its fresh right now and I fux with it
These old heads keep comin out the woodworks to get woodshopped
Give this hippy flashbacks of his dirt performances when I show up with this wood stock
thats strong
If Hall of Names was a building, yah spot would be in some god awful place
And the admin would keep movin your name tag further and further off the site …like Office Space
never really saw this movie so it fell flat
Congrats on champing FN. If I won , I’d play Kar and vacate the title
Competition is none, plus on any given night, weak niggas like you can make the finals
lol ok i dig this, this is a type of line I rarely see anymore, but this is one of my fav style of personals
I’m at your door for a truce, and just when you think dangers avoided
I’d slap you!
punch your wife in the face, and hook your kid like a hanger abortion
ok this shit mean
Im hard as shit, plus my metaphors play hard to get
Suttin like your wife, right before i caught the bitch
eh this dodoo
If seeing is believing, then yall are blind for believing this dude
Cuz he'll only be mentioned when it comes to little brother, like 9th wonder leaving the group
not feeling

pretty cool verse, I like the way u aprouch ur lines

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij (Post 510171)
Final week.. who is this geek? Ain’t no way you beatin’ me, Sally
You Jon Snow in Game of Thrones, I’ll kill this bastard in the season finale
ok, cool
This’ll be over fast.. you’re no Main Attraction - in a leading role, you’re ass
Since you think you a Star, I’ll break your fuckin neck so you can have a supporting cast
Nah this is old school. Kinda weak bro
My shotty’ll destroy you, leave a fuckin mess where you stood there, homo
When you get to heaven, it’ll just be a shoe with wings like the Goodyear logo
nah
I heard your dick game is weak.. ya girl said she’s tired of the sex
She calls you Hand Sanitizer.. the more you rub it, the drier she gets
firrrrrreeeeee
That bitch gave up the pussy tho.. the reality has to hurt you
She took the pipe like the bad kid in an anti-drug commercial
Nah, this shit really feeling cliche/dated this week
Plus your faggot set don’t rock - y’all pussies ain’t got your hearts in it
For you an’ your crew, I’ll be writin’ more chalk lines than Bart Simpson
fire
This Joker is an X-Man, to draw on this cartoon is no trouble
I’ll make this comic strip, but on this page, we’ll never see your quotes bubble
good flip but u know these concepts old af
This the season finale, I ain’t even need to prep to show this geek is just broke
I’m John Oliver, it took me thirty minutes to turn your Last Week into a joke
thats hard


this battle is down to the wire close
good shit by both
Pinot had HARD hits, but his misses was off by like a mile

I literally had to read it 3 times.

Almost cant pick Pinit 3 good lines was great, But Chyeeah stood consistent even when he wasnt hitting

v Chyeah


fire battle. Rep to both

~RustyGunZ~ 07-26-2015 09:52 PM

You’re kungfugrip’s older bro, can’t help but to laugh at this
That means you were texting backwhen Destroyer was just playing battleship

cool

You wack as shit, changed yah name cuz new cats had no respect for yah quotes
Now text is back showing signs of life , but nobody checks for a Pulse

cool

These old heads keep comin out the woodworks to get woodshopped
Give this hippy flashbacks of his dirt performances when I show up with this wood stock

http://hoops-nation.com/community/pu...lt/IYtzswg.png

If Hall of Names was a building, yah spot would be in some god awful place
And the admin would keep movin your name tag further and further off the site …like Office Space

eh ok, cool concept bad delivery

Congrats on champing FN. If I won , I’d play Kar and vacate the title
Competition is none, plus on any given night, weak niggas like you can make the finals

alright

I’m at your door for a truce, and just when you think dangers avoided
I’d slap you!
punch your wife in the face, and hook your kid like a hanger abortion

eh

Im hard as shit, plus my metaphors play hard to get
Suttin like your wife, right before i caught the bitch

http://i43.tinypic.com/119wm4m.jpg

If seeing is believing, then yall are blind for believing this dude
Cuz he'll only be mentioned when it comes to little brother, like 9th wonder leaving the group

cool

vs

Final week.. who is this geek? Ain’t no way you beatin’ me, Sally
You Jon Snow in Game of Thrones, I’ll kill this bastard in the season finale

alright

This’ll be over fast.. you’re no Main Attraction - in a leading role, you’re ass
Since you think you a Star, I’ll break your fuckin neck so you can have a supporting cast

http://i.imgur.com/VuG3gqF.png

My shotty’ll destroy you, leave a fuckin mess where you stood there, homo
When you get to heaven, it’ll just be a shoe with wings like the Goodyear logo

http://i.imgur.com/0AygrTV.png

I heard your dick game is weak.. ya girl said she’s tired of the sex
She calls you Hand Sanitizer.. the more you rub it, the drier she gets

seen this

That bitch gave up the pussy tho.. the reality has to hurt you
She took the pipe like the bad kid in an anti-drug commercial

ehh

Plus your faggot set don’t rock - y’all pussies ain’t got your hearts in it
For you an’ your crew, I’ll be writin’ more chalk lines than Bart Simpson

think i've seen it but cool

This Joker is an X-Man, to draw on this cartoon is no trouble
I’ll make this comic strip, but on this page, we’ll never see your quotes bubble

bad wording, played

This the season finale, I ain’t even need to prep to show this geek is just broke
I’m John Oliver, it took me thirty minutes to turn your Last Week into a joke

cool

v/pinot

chyeahs best verse in a long time

close

Junto 07-26-2015 11:41 PM

You’re kungfugrip’s older bro, can’t help but to laugh at this
That means you were texting backwhen Destroyer was just playing battleship
haha okay cool start
You wack as shit, changed yah name cuz new cats had no respect for yah quotes
Now text is back showing signs of life , but nobody checks for a Pulse
this was nice... good context+personal+nameplay
These old heads keep comin out the woodworks to get woodshopped
Give this hippy flashbacks of his dirt performances when I show up with this wood stock
heat
If Hall of Names was a building, yah spot would be in some god awful place
And the admin would keep movin your name tag further and further off the site …like Office Space
creative concept
Congrats on champing FN. If I won , I’d play Kar and vacate the title
Competition is none, plus on any given night, weak niggas like you can make the finals
aiiiiight
I’m at your door for a truce, and just when you think dangers avoided
I’d slap you!
punch your wife in the face, and hook your kid like a hanger abortion
this was kinda gutter... I like it
Im hard as shit, plus my metaphors play hard to get
Suttin like your wife, right before i caught the bitch
ahh man this one was shitty. First serious miss tho.
If seeing is believing, then yall are blind for believing this dude
Cuz he'll only be mentioned when it comes to little brother, like 9th wonder leaving the group
solid close

vs.
Final week.. who is this geek? Ain’t no way you beatin’ me, Sally
You Jon Snow in Game of Thrones, I’ll kill this bastard in the season finale
nothin crazy, but smooth
This’ll be over fast.. you’re no Main Attraction - in a leading role, you’re ass
Since you think you a Star, I’ll break your fuckin neck so you can have a supporting cast
ehhh cast plays are too old, even wit good execution
My shotty’ll destroy you, leave a fuckin mess where you stood there, homo
When you get to heaven, it’ll just be a shoe with wings like the Goodyear logo
solid
I heard your dick game is weak.. ya girl said she’s tired of the sex
She calls you Hand Sanitizer.. the more you rub it, the drier she gets
hahaha dope
That bitch gave up the pussy tho.. the reality has to hurt you
She took the pipe like the bad kid in an anti-drug commercial
too simple for me
Plus your faggot set don’t rock - y’all pussies ain’t got your hearts in it
For you an’ your crew, I’ll be writin’ more chalk lines than Bart Simpson
pretty nice
This Joker is an X-Man, to draw on this cartoon is no trouble
I’ll make this comic strip, but on this page, we’ll never see your quotes bubble
ehhh this kinda played too, & X-man my set up
This the season finale, I ain’t even need to prep to show this geek is just broke
I’m John Oliver, it took me thirty minutes to turn your Last Week into a joke
I like that

This was a nasty battle.
Chyeah came wit some unexpected haymakers and a real good verse overall
Pulse was solid too. Hand sanitizer & jon oliver were heat... Jon snow, bart, & goodyear all quality
Chyeaah had check for Pulse, woodstock & hanger abortion... that was tough man.
The worst miss was on chyeeah side wit the wife line but damn...
Almost every other line hit a little and this could definitely go either way...
But I got chyeaah in a real close one wit his best verse I seen.

props to both, great read

V/ Chyeeahhh


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