Lotto Smirk vs. Strikta {Strikta wins}

Yppih · 07-17-2015, 08:21 AM

I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off

Cool 2.5/5

I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog

Ehhh, its not bad, I thought the execution could've been sharper 2/5

I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck

Yeah cool 2.5/5

Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind

Nah bruh 1/5

U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke

Best line so far 3/5

Overall - 11/25

Still a decent key, It seems you didnt put a whole lot of effort, but the verse was still a solid battle verse.

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you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting
don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing

No punch + the concept wasn't proper.... 1/5

way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses

Concept was ok actually, but was let down by the execution 1.5/5

ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping...
u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion

Ehh seem like an actual personal. Not like I know Aloe, execution was still lacking 2/5

openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore
Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor

Statement here not a punch mate. 1/5

Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations
cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations

Nah bro, wasnt feeling this 1/5

Overall - 6.5/25

Just felt a lot of your concepts came off forced. I think getting that creativity flowing will help.

Overall - Strikta, was the more opposing force here and he just held his own here pretty comfortably.

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07-17-2015, 08:21 AM	#1
Yppih Clips.....Ammo Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 126 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 2318590	I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off Cool 2.5/5 I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog Ehhh, its not bad, I thought the execution could've been sharper 2/5 I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck Yeah cool 2.5/5 Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind Nah bruh 1/5 U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke Best line so far 3/5 Overall - 11/25 Still a decent key, It seems you didnt put a whole lot of effort, but the verse was still a solid battle verse. --------- you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing No punch + the concept wasn't proper.... 1/5 way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses Concept was ok actually, but was let down by the execution 1.5/5 ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping... u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion Ehh seem like an actual personal. Not like I know Aloe, execution was still lacking 2/5 openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor Statement here not a punch mate. 1/5 Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations Nah bro, wasnt feeling this 1/5 Overall - 6.5/25 Just felt a lot of your concepts came off forced. I think getting that creativity flowing will help. Overall - Strikta, was the more opposing force here and he just held his own here pretty comfortably.