Lotto Smirk vs. Strikta {Strikta wins}
 

10 lines due in 24 hrs. G/L.

Check. I got my 10 ready @Lotto Smirk.

Holla.

I don't play Lotto..

I don't..

I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off
I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog
I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck
Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind
U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke

you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting
don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing
way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses
ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping...
u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion
openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore
Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor
Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations
cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations

blah almost didn't show

Not your strongest verse, Lotto. Can't say 24hrs is a lot of time especially with a busy schedule, though. Props for both of you showing and meeting the deadline. Strik gets this one fairly easy for me, based on his closer alone. He had some other decent ones as well, but that closer really sealed the deal for me.

V/ Strika

One shot, hot dog, open up, Lincoln

Vs

Strict regime, rest were misses or badly worded

Strikt had creativity mixed w/ generics some bars poorly executed, cool wp and wit tho, Lincoln was lotb tbh props

Lotto not very harsh and incorrectly using similes in text can hurt you and that need a dollar bar sucked ass lml, constrict was light and id say played as fuck and stretched bad dude.
Strikta takes this comfortably

Mvgt strikta

I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off

Cool 2.5/5

I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog

Ehhh, its not bad, I thought the execution could've been sharper 2/5

I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck

Yeah cool 2.5/5

Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind

Nah bruh 1/5

U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke

Best line so far 3/5

Overall - 11/25

Still a decent key, It seems you didnt put a whole lot of effort, but the verse was still a solid battle verse.

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you looking like a hobo, see me in flash clothes strutting
don't live by strikt regime, being a poor lonely man who'll never amount to nothing

No punch + the concept wasn't proper.... 1/5

way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses

Concept was ok actually, but was let down by the execution 1.5/5

ur broke n a gay fgt, just go back to begging like back when u was hoping...
u was screaming I need a dollar just in hope for some payment off aloe's track promotion

Ehh seem like an actual personal. Not like I know Aloe, execution was still lacking 2/5

openly accepted battle with a plan to choke this whore
Cus I'll constrict n the pressure'll make him show his writing skills really only borderline poor

Statement here not a punch mate. 1/5

Halloween or any festive season, I keep it tradition through generations
cus we do penny for the guy while that's just your life's big expectations

Nah bro, wasnt feeling this 1/5

Overall - 6.5/25

Just felt a lot of your concepts came off forced. I think getting that creativity flowing will help.

Overall - Strikta, was the more opposing force here and he just held his own here pretty comfortably.

bump

Close it strik got this props strik

Hi...

I don't hunt baby deer but I'd cook u & let da chrome engulf
It's time for ur dirt nap & 1 shot'll have u lookin jus like ya dozin off
I don't pay fa ass or dome, I just make em get a locked jaw
Ya girl want a ballpark figure, & if I pull it out she ate it like a hot dog
I'll do a drive by & spray til every shell in da macs dumped
Pull up, open up in ya crib & click dat metal like umbrellas & bad luck
Thought that we was friends? Nah u gettin' tossed into a spin
If u was a warning a tornado's coming I'm throwin caution to da wind
U suckin duke, to see ur battles make me wanna punch a mute
Any link & LS better be a damn luxury sedan, or I'd jus fucking puke

I liked the entire verse, it was beatable tho...


way you throwin out battles,not surprised u look shook n nervous
cus with all that rust u knocking off it's only shown a bigger dent in your verses

youre better than this...
Strikt has so much personal info on here and u didn't capitalize off of it...
strikt regime had potential but the wording hurt u...
stop rushing your verses bro...

Strikt was more consistent...

vote- Strikt...

Bye...

umbrella(was aight), Lincoln ls was dope

vs

regime....


thought lotto was gonna drop dope after that opener but i didnt feel anything really. striks verse was ok, not much hit imo the lincoln ls bar was dope nameplay and i got him with one more quote.

v/strikt

5-0 @Hush