Innovator vs Destroyer - (Innovator wins)

[Objective]

Destroyer - First stanza is pretty dope but I'd like to see a little more refined punctuation. Beside of that you write a poem with a clear and psychologically brutal storyline. The second stanza is pretty dope imo because it's as direct as it is and it ends with that certain sting that if you can't relate to it you still understand the sorrow. The second verse was also straight forward and maybe even a little bit hostile, but I love the energy and the story as a whole. Cool shit.

Innovator - Love the first stanza and especially the first three lines, excellent opener. You as well got a certain type of energy in your poem, you can tell where it's coming from and I feel it's the way you start your stanzas that make it powerful. ''Cigar filled aroma, whiskey fueled anger'' makes the tone of the stanza and you follow it well. The only drawback is the use of ''the'' in the beginning of 4 lines in a row which is repetitive in the negative sense The last stanza starts off well with the first sentence, I love how you kept the consitency up as far as the ''opener'' to each stanza goes. You also manage to keep it consistent along with the repetitive (but positive as it feeds off the second stanza) end underlining what your character truly felt in that moment.

Vote - I felt both came off good, Destroyer with slightly more energy as far as straight to the bone and honest words go. It's a really heartfelt piece that I enjoyed to read. Innovators verse compared to Destro's I felt was a little bit more refined in a way as far as style goes. I also enjoy great punctuation and grammar which was slightly better so points to him there, but what really made me vote for Innovator is the piece as a whole. The imagery was a little bit better, the atmosphere was better altough the energy in Destro's was lethal and one-liners here and there made my vote tip in his favor. To clarify; Innovator gets my vote.