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07-01-2015, 03:41 PM
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Lime Life
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The rhymes were awesome in this, technically it was very sound but I have to be honest, I have absolutely no idea what you are talking about in this piece...maybe you could enlighten me so as to receive better/relevant feed?
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07-02-2015, 04:53 AM
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sure its abstract so don't take it as a strict interpretation as you yourself will come up with your own way of seeing it..... This that rye fungus live culture hear kittens cry my chairs legs broke im to busy gettin high sitten on the floor kiss the sky ---- ^^this is LSD hiphop i hear babies cry but im sitten on my ass getting high kiss the sky my minds on bigger things whats the problem if i try judgement brings more judgement upon me learn to separate the zombies and living giving you a headache and they not kidding.... ^^i like what i do so i wont judge u but if your a fake or dead person i dont involve my self to be around people who give me to many headaches lol forbidden doors open the schism got a rhythm of crunchy jaw broken soft spoken i got seduced started sleeping on the bottom floor ^^seeing things for what they are from a secret its a rhythm thats crunchy lol but soft spoken ...i was living to much in my lower mind forgot the roof had to watch it all with its ventscapes peeling cuts that i gave with a switchblade misbehavior was the reason karma showed me i can clean it later better then never... ^^the roof is your head and watching my thoughts they sneak in threw the vent causeing a switchblade misbehavior its better to do better now then never lol however u to take better to be... cut your dope with your razor my hiphop aint somthin to save ya or savor like saviors came singing bringing you gifts got your ears ringing ^^this is hood hip hop still so its not some fake shit its philosophy a ear ringing gift.... picking treasure out of garbage cans eatin pussy then shootin it with rubberbandz clams casino extra caviar for the great bambino ... ^^even in waste you can find treasures pussy and rubberbandz sex and money... pussy is like gambling i get it like babe ruth lmao.... Last edited by brokenhal0; 07-02-2015 at 04:58 AM. |
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