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05-31-2015, 03:29 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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Nah, this was cool, man. For one I had a distaste with a bit of your imagery. The storyline, was awesome, but I felt you didn't expand. of course that's the contiguous foreshadow at play, but it was just a bit...off. Good, on task writing though. Everything seemed okay, but felt the shift from shoulders-realization of no more shoulders through metaphor was super fast. The abrupt ending was probablyyyyy part of it? But yeah.
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