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Old 05-20-2015, 10:53 PM   #1
Mr. J
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strollin down the block, puffin herbal medicines
stolen by my thoughts, grab a journal, reminisce
molded to be mocked: an infernal nemesis
smokin too much pot.. choked-up purple messages

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this little section is smooth, I'm impressed by this
I often enjoy reading your works when I'm in the mood
and when I see you pull something off like that, I see hope
I also quite liked after 'sash & girth' or however that went
the line following massacre is quite well, this is an improvement
you seem more controlled. as a matter of fact...
I can easily masterbate to this
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