Neighbor 0-0 vs Nightmare 0-0 - NEIGHBOR WINS

[Neighbor]

First off

I'll leave pinstripe slits across ya jugular; getcha windpipe split
Then put ya slut wife on the midnight shift & charge the mound like an inside pitch
Shots could make a semi flip.. I break jaws, you ain't callin my bluff
Ya bae's in contention to get Brady suspended the way she drains balls in the clutch
I'm a contract killer; you signed the dotted line, it's over & done with
So this 'Mare don't carry out full-terms, it's only right I put a Colt in his stomach
Getcha spine racked, actin all brash.. you even try that, gats get drawn
Use ya mom's drywall to chalk line y'all & watch Nightfall like Isaac Asimov
You be a dying afterthought.. leave you on dry ice if you gamble w/ me
Advanced Warfare guns - Borgata chip in his palm that'll end Nightlife in Atlantic City

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Nightmare

First off..

He dnt pose a threat, gun bar king ill leave here wit smokin techs
Cuz ill put arms to ya mid section like we was in high school playin open chest
Straight. Nostalgia bar.
Lawyers paid - thats no case. Blow his fukin head off, cops got no trace
They'll call me Tim the toolman Taylor how I leave dis Neighbor wit no face
This would have been a dope bar in 98. In 2015 its like a 6.
Homie u dnt bang sets or bust guns. Honestly dis dudes not a goon
W/e u throw up..will jus end up on ur bck like a bags thread wen I beat puke outta u
Not bad. But you mangled the fuck out of the wording on the closer.
So stop the fake shit. Ur girls a slut by nature n u hate it
Cuz that bitch be going around for no reason like a blank disc
Like the concept, but hit comes off a little simple as worded.
N nigga ive beat the best n we all know dis dudes a hater
Muhfuka wen u on top dis long u have the right to say fuk a Neighbor
Throwaway swag bar.

Originally Posted by Neighbor

I'll leave pinstripe slits across ya jugular; getcha windpipe split
Then put ya slut wife on the midnight shift & charge the mound like an inside pitch
This was cool. 'Charge the mound' is slightly forced but not bad.
Shots could make a semi flip.. I break jaws, you ain't callin my bluff
Ya bae's in contention to get Brady suspended the way she drains balls in the clutch
Nice current events flip.
I'm a contract killer; you signed the dotted line, it's over & done with
So this 'Mare don't carry out full-terms, it's only right I put a Colt in his stomach
Not bad. But gunplay is a little boring.
Getcha spine racked, actin all brash.. you even try that, gats get drawn
Use ya mom's drywall to chalk line y'all & watch Nightfall like Isaac Asimov
Huge Isaac Asimov fan. Not such much a fan of this bar.
You be a dying afterthought.. leave you on dry ice if you gamble w/ me
Advanced Warfare guns - Borgata chip in his palm that'll end Nightlife in Atlantic City
This is cool and works with a little force

Nightmare seems like he knows what he's doing but was probably rusty or unmotivated. He had 4/5 decent bars but nothing that was amazing. Nothing that was horrible, but nothing I particularly liked.

Neighbor also has 4/5 solid bars, and his miss isn't as bad as Nightmare's. He has better concepts in general, but some of them used slightly forced wordplay to get across. But over all a pretty good verse.

Vote: Neighbor - this was a closer battle than I thought it would be but Neighbor dropped a stronger verse.

[Sharp]

He dnt pose a threat, gun bar king ill leave here wit smokin techs
Cuz ill put arms to ya mid section like we was in high school playin open chest
ok
Lawyers paid - thats no case. Blow his fukin head off, cops got no trace
They'll call me Tim the toolman Taylor how I leave dis Neighbor wit no face
really basic neighbor flip with a cool bit of originality
Homie u dnt bang sets or bust guns. Honestly dis dudes not a goon
W/e u throw up..will jus end up on ur bck like a bags thread wen I beat puke outta u
coulda been so Dope but wording was bad
So stop the fake shit. Ur girls a slut by nature n u hate it
Cuz that bitch be going around for no reason like a blank disc
cool
N nigga ive beat the best n we all know dis dudes a hater
Muhfuka wen u on top dis long u have the right to say fuk a Neighbor
nah





I'll leave pinstripe slits across ya jugular; getcha windpipe split
Then put ya slut wife on the midnight shift & charge the mound like an inside pitch
nice
Shots could make a semi flip.. I break jaws, you ain't callin my bluff
Ya bae's in contention to get Brady suspended the way she drains balls in the clutch
I like the Brady tie in but it's still a balls flip that you can see coming
I'm a contract killer; you signed the dotted line, it's over & done with
So this 'Mare don't carry out full-terms, it's only right I put a Colt in his stomach
solid
Getcha spine racked, actin all brash.. you even try that, gats get drawn
Use ya mom's drywall to chalk line y'all & watch Nightfall like Isaac Asimov
ok
You be a dying afterthought.. leave you on dry ice if you gamble w/ me
Advanced Warfare guns - Borgata chip in his palm that'll end Nightlife in Atlantic City
ok


I think neigh was more consistent and his opener was lotb. I like creds blank disc line but most neighbor flips are done and the puke bar needed wording help

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