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Old 01-25-2013, 10:08 AM   #1
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how to describe it - turrets and towers divided
the loudest recorded 27 hours of silence
powdery lines, knowledge is crisis. power is priceless
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great start, instantly had a good flow.. easy to follow, solid multi's with intriguing content.. that's how you start a piece! it was probably the strongest set of lines overall. i wanted you to go in a different direction than you did, cold war/stand off of military power kind of thing. but the rest was good too, kept a consistent flow and showed you have a decent vocab. props dead!
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