Similac 0-0 vs Orc 0-0 {Orc wins by NS}

Sharp · 11-16-2014, 11:59 PM

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, November 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread

First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Similac @Orc

Orc · 11-17-2014, 05:57 PM

yea 10 lines

Orc · 11-20-2014, 05:44 PM

ungh. alias fgt, how violent is u!?
ima give you a nosebleed you can wipe off witcha Spinal Tissue
even my basic ish could have this lame ina hearse
cuz it's one punch then Simile down quick (like making this verse)
been a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still,
i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills
i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin
ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin
arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over
can end ya at ANY time. i knw this due be a bitch too
.. i control Sim's life. now the videogame is gonna sue me for misuse
i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,.
.. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off
i don't lose in this game, u face contusions n' pain
&&just for thinking Scimitar that legacy ima run him thru witha blade

Blanco Bishop · 11-21-2014, 03:12 PM

Group hugging...open up..n opener were gully as fuck

Fire man.

Tic · 11-26-2014, 09:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc

ungh. alias fgt, how violent is u!?
ima give you a nosebleed you can wipe off witcha Spinal Tissue
Cool twist on a used concept.
even my basic ish could have this lame ina hearse
cuz it's one punch then Simile down quick (like making this verse)
Lol this was ok.
been a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still,
i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills
Cool twist on this concept.
i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin
ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin
Dope.
arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
Dope.
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
Not a fan of this one really.
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over
Haven't seen the movie but I can dig this.
can end ya at ANY time. i knw this due be a bitch too
.. i control Sim's life. now the videogame is gonna sue me for misuse
This is alright.
i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,.
.. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off
Dope.
i don't lose in this game, u face contusions n' pain
&&just for thinking Scimitar that legacy ima run him thru witha blade
Nice WP and closer.

Overall you had a strong verse. A couple lines were alright but there were some dope ones in there as well. Good shit as always.

Allen Knight · 11-21-2014, 03:19 PM

arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over
i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,.
.. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off
^^^
those were tight
good verse, had some bangers in there.

E Tha Real · 11-21-2014, 03:53 PM

Diggin your style it reminds me of an old text head called Creatical. Really creative and gritty stuff. First time reading you but it looks like your a seasoned vet and got champ list to prove it. Hope heads read this and it inspires them to mix up their style. One final word=refreshing. Ok more words. LoL a damn shame it got no showed.

Glossy Finish Dick Lips · 11-21-2014, 04:25 PM

been a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still,
i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills
i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin
ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin
arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over
i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,.
.. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off

Spinal tissue, Bone tissue all tissue has been done to death but for some reason I liked your flip on it. It was slick, son so props. The bars in bold I thought were dope AF, the rest quoted were solid. Don't think this dude would have had a chance. Good shit, tho @Orc - you usually bring fire and I didn't expect anything less, tbh. So props. Dope drop all in all.

Wordz AhGod · 11-24-2014, 12:34 AM

een a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still,
i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills
i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin
ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin
arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over

all haymakers imo.. fuck you orc.

jilti · 11-24-2014, 12:35 AM

Started slow but picked up momentum in the second half of ur verse with group hugging, closest of friends, sim life, and scimitar.

murda sho · 11-24-2014, 04:33 PM

This verse was tough bro

11-21-2014, 03:19 PM	#6
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me .. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,. .. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off ^^^ those were tight good verse, had some bangers in there. __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

11-24-2014, 04:33 PM	#11
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758482	This verse was tough bro __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

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11-17-2014, 05:57 PM	#2
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	yea 10 lines

11-20-2014, 05:44 PM	#3
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	ungh. alias fgt, how violent is u!? ima give you a nosebleed you can wipe off witcha Spinal Tissue even my basic ish could have this lame ina hearse cuz it's one punch then Simile down quick (like making this verse) been a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still, i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me .. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over can end ya at ANY time. i knw this due be a bitch too .. i control Sim's life. now the videogame is gonna sue me for misuse i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,. .. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off i don't lose in this game, u face contusions n' pain &&just for thinking Scimitar that legacy ima run him thru witha blade

11-21-2014, 03:12 PM	#4
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Group hugging...open up..n opener were gully as fuck Fire man.

11-21-2014, 03:53 PM	#7
E Tha Real yes really Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: NC Posts: 362 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 6054895	Diggin your style it reminds me of an old text head called Creatical. Really creative and gritty stuff. First time reading you but it looks like your a seasoned vet and got champ list to prove it. Hope heads read this and it inspires them to mix up their style. One final word=refreshing. Ok more words. LoL a damn shame it got no showed.

11-21-2014, 04:25 PM	#8
Glossy Finish Dick Lips Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Astoria, NY Posts: 1,417 Battle Record: 10-4 Rep Power: 0	been a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still, i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me .. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,. .. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off Spinal tissue, Bone tissue all tissue has been done to death but for some reason I liked your flip on it. It was slick, son so props. The bars in bold I thought were dope AF, the rest quoted were solid. Don't think this dude would have had a chance. Good shit, tho @Orc - you usually bring fire and I didn't expect anything less, tbh. So props. Dope drop all in all.

11-24-2014, 12:34 AM	#9
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	een a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still, i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me .. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over all haymakers imo.. fuck you orc.

11-24-2014, 12:35 AM	#10
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Started slow but picked up momentum in the second half of ur verse with group hugging, closest of friends, sim life, and scimitar.