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Sharp 11-16-2014 11:59 PM

Similac 0-0 vs Orc 0-0 {Orc wins by NS}
 
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday, November 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
  • EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Similac @Orc

Orc 11-17-2014 05:57 PM

yea 10 lines

Orc 11-20-2014 05:44 PM

ungh. alias fgt, how violent is u!?
ima give you a nosebleed you can wipe off witcha Spinal Tissue
even my basic ish could have this lame ina hearse
cuz it's one punch then Simile down quick (like making this verse)
been a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still,
i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills
i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin
ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin
arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over
can end ya at ANY time. i knw this due be a bitch too
.. i control Sim's life. now the videogame is gonna sue me for misuse
i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,.
.. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off
i don't lose in this game, u face contusions n' pain
&&just for thinking Scimitar that legacy ima run him thru witha blade

Blanco Bishop 11-21-2014 03:12 PM

Group hugging...open up..n opener were gully as fuck

Fire man.

Allen Knight 11-21-2014 03:19 PM

arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over
i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,.
.. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off
^^^
those were tight
good verse, had some bangers in there.

E Tha Real 11-21-2014 03:53 PM

Diggin your style it reminds me of an old text head called Creatical. Really creative and gritty stuff. First time reading you but it looks like your a seasoned vet and got champ list to prove it. Hope heads read this and it inspires them to mix up their style. One final word=refreshing. Ok more words. LoL a damn shame it got no showed.

Glossy Finish Dick Lips 11-21-2014 04:25 PM

been a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still,
i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills

i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin
ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin
arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over
i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,.
.. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off


Spinal tissue, Bone tissue all tissue has been done to death but for some reason I liked your flip on it. It was slick, son so props. The bars in bold I thought were dope AF, the rest quoted were solid. Don't think this dude would have had a chance. Good shit, tho @Orc - you usually bring fire and I didn't expect anything less, tbh. So props. Dope drop all in all.

Wordz AhGod 11-24-2014 12:34 AM

een a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still,
i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills
i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin
ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin
arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over

all haymakers imo.. fuck you orc.

jilti 11-24-2014 12:35 AM

Started slow but picked up momentum in the second half of ur verse with group hugging, closest of friends, sim life, and scimitar.

murda sho 11-24-2014 04:33 PM

This verse was tough bro

Tic 11-26-2014 09:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc (Post 441645)
ungh. alias fgt, how violent is u!?
ima give you a nosebleed you can wipe off witcha Spinal Tissue
Cool twist on a used concept.
even my basic ish could have this lame ina hearse
cuz it's one punch then Simile down quick (like making this verse)
Lol this was ok.
been a while since i unleashed the quill n im beastly still,
i'll give u that Hands On approach. it'll train managers some ppl skills
Cool twist on this concept.
i'll call up a favour & lets see if u true thuggin
ya crew gone have Arms around everyone. u'd think we was group huggin
Dope.
arghh! ima grab ur fucking head n have it broken n bent
i'll stabbb. & watch it open up to me like we were the closest of friends
Dope.
mannn, u'll need some reverse decision to hopefully stop me
.. i need a reverse decision too. idk whether to drive back over ur body
Not a fan of this one really.
im outtaaaa this world. you just a newbie, soldier
my lines r Interstellar. ur lines are a wtf moment like when the movies over
Haven't seen the movie but I can dig this.
can end ya at ANY time. i knw this due be a bitch too
.. i control Sim's life. now the videogame is gonna sue me for misuse
This is alright.
i cud take ya girl w/ ease cuz u ugly n mad soft,.
.. thats a light switch for me. dog, she won't fuck YOU til thats off
Dope.
i don't lose in this game, u face contusions n' pain
&&just for thinking Scimitar that legacy ima run him thru witha blade
Nice WP and closer.

Overall you had a strong verse. A couple lines were alright but there were some dope ones in there as well. Good shit as always.


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