Tic Tac vs. Tazz [Tic Tac Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 11-06-2014, 06:57 PM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

Tazz · 11-08-2014, 03:25 PM

check...

see when i strike its lethal, i break records when it comes to flexin pawns
i'll slump his jaw, n have this nigga in the Guinness book for the worlds longest yawn

Tic · 11-10-2014, 02:28 PM

Dog that line is trash, and my bad for withholdin my drop
I was Tied Down @ work...with ya girl playin rodeo w/ my cock

Kin · 11-10-2014, 04:07 PM

Tazz... not much of a punch

Ticker...nothin whoa but u already know u juz needed a jab...

Vote..
Tic to tha tac

El Muffin · 11-10-2014, 05:01 PM

tazz urs was ok.

just longest yawn just isnt visceral enough for a gunplay(edit: or hwever u intended to slump his jaw) for me

came off mehish you feel?

tic was a decent flip on a old concept. landed more effectively imho

v/tictac

fresh · 11-10-2014, 05:28 PM

Longest yawn kinda weak. Didn't like the correlation between time if the yawn n length of the jaw

Tic tac was more personal and had a cleaner execution

V/tic

YDK · 11-10-2014, 08:12 PM

Tbh your gay an steal your bitch lines are all pretty boring anymore but tictac had a decent flip an execution on a tired concept, razz was originalish but execution was trash.
I gotta vote tic tax for the stronger execution and punch itself

Unfukwitable · 11-10-2014, 11:18 PM

ehh felt this was close concept wise but the wording and execution made one seem a step above... v/Tac

Blanco Bishop · 11-11-2014, 02:04 AM

Hmm. Idk but i kinda liked tazzs bar. Maybe the set up could of been worded better but i was diggin the longest yawn bit.
Tics was ok but kind of expected.

Regardless tic did word it better n came across with more fluidity.
If executed a lil better tazz would of won...

V tic

herpes · 11-11-2014, 10:35 AM

Liked Tics concept more but Tazz had better wording & flow with the multis

Vote-Tic Tac

BROKE LESNAR · 11-11-2014, 12:32 PM

the longest yawn ending didn't have much of a payoff

tic's was funny with a good misdirect, cool flip on the tied down concept

v-tic tac

Glossy Finish Dick Lips · 11-11-2014, 07:01 PM

I got Tac here - even tho the whole attacking some ones significant other is definitely stale and played out but the twist was nice.

Taz bar was ok but felt like he could gotten a little more harsher with it for more if an impact.

Spoken · 11-11-2014, 11:52 PM

Razz was alight if he had a better flip and execution on it but u got Tac cause he played off the bar and it was an instant t connect nothing fancy just enough

Clayray · 11-12-2014, 01:14 AM

Vote Tic-Tac

Didn't feel the punch in tazz bar.
Tic came light but only bc he knew that's all he had to do.

11-06-2014, 06:57 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Tic Tac vs. Tazz [Tic Tac Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

11-10-2014, 05:01 PM	#5
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	tazz urs was ok. just longest yawn just isnt visceral enough for a gunplay(edit: or hwever u intended to slump his jaw) for me came off mehish you feel? tic was a decent flip on a old concept. landed more effectively imho v/tictac __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 11-10-2014 at 06:31 PM.

11-10-2014, 08:12 PM	#7
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Tbh your gay an steal your bitch lines are all pretty boring anymore but tictac had a decent flip an execution on a tired concept, razz was originalish but execution was trash. I gotta vote tic tax for the stronger execution and punch itself __________________

11-10-2014, 11:18 PM	#8
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	ehh felt this was close concept wise but the wording and execution made one seem a step above... v/Tac __________________ WICKeD

11-11-2014, 11:52 PM	#13
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Razz was alight if he had a better flip and execution on it but u got Tac cause he played off the bar and it was an instant t connect nothing fancy just enough __________________ WP Po'ethics

11-08-2014, 03:25 PM	#2
Tazz Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 22 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 90564	check... see when i strike its lethal, i break records when it comes to flexin pawns i'll slump his jaw, n have this nigga in the Guinness book for the worlds longest yawn

11-10-2014, 02:28 PM	#3
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	Dog that line is trash, and my bad for withholdin my drop I was Tied Down @ work...with ya girl playin rodeo w/ my cock

11-10-2014, 04:07 PM	#4
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	Tazz... not much of a punch Ticker...nothin whoa but u already know u juz needed a jab... Vote.. Tic to tha tac

11-10-2014, 05:28 PM	#6
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Longest yawn kinda weak. Didn't like the correlation between time if the yawn n length of the jaw Tic tac was more personal and had a cleaner execution V/tic

11-11-2014, 02:04 AM	#9
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Hmm. Idk but i kinda liked tazzs bar. Maybe the set up could of been worded better but i was diggin the longest yawn bit. Tics was ok but kind of expected. Regardless tic did word it better n came across with more fluidity. If executed a lil better tazz would of won... V tic

11-11-2014, 10:35 AM	#10
herpes come get some Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 15 Rep Power: 0	Liked Tics concept more but Tazz had better wording & flow with the multis Vote-Tic Tac

11-11-2014, 12:32 PM	#11
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	the longest yawn ending didn't have much of a payoff tic's was funny with a good misdirect, cool flip on the tied down concept v-tic tac

11-11-2014, 07:01 PM	#12
Glossy Finish Dick Lips Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Astoria, NY Posts: 1,417 Battle Record: 10-4 Rep Power: 0	I got Tac here - even tho the whole attacking some ones significant other is definitely stale and played out but the twist was nice. Taz bar was ok but felt like he could gotten a little more harsher with it for more if an impact.

11-12-2014, 01:14 AM	#14
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	Vote Tic-Tac Didn't feel the punch in tazz bar. Tic came light but only bc he knew that's all he had to do.

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