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BROKE LESNAR 11-06-2014 06:57 PM

Tic Tac vs. Tazz [Tic Tac Wins]
 
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Tazz 11-08-2014 03:25 PM

check...

see when i strike its lethal, i break records when it comes to flexin pawns
i'll slump his jaw, n have this nigga in the Guinness book for the worlds longest yawn

Tic 11-10-2014 02:28 PM

Dog that line is trash, and my bad for withholdin my drop
I was Tied Down @ work...with ya girl playin rodeo w/ my cock

Kin 11-10-2014 04:07 PM

Tazz... not much of a punch

Ticker...nothin whoa but u already know u juz needed a jab...

Vote..
Tic to tha tac

El Muffin 11-10-2014 05:01 PM

tazz urs was ok.

just longest yawn just isnt visceral enough for a gunplay(edit: or hwever u intended to slump his jaw) for me

came off mehish you feel?


tic was a decent flip on a old concept. landed more effectively imho

v/tictac

fresh 11-10-2014 05:28 PM

Longest yawn kinda weak. Didn't like the correlation between time if the yawn n length of the jaw

Tic tac was more personal and had a cleaner execution

V/tic

YDK 11-10-2014 08:12 PM

Tbh your gay an steal your bitch lines are all pretty boring anymore but tictac had a decent flip an execution on a tired concept, razz was originalish but execution was trash.
I gotta vote tic tax for the stronger execution and punch itself

Unfukwitable 11-10-2014 11:18 PM

ehh felt this was close concept wise but the wording and execution made one seem a step above... v/Tac

Blanco Bishop 11-11-2014 02:04 AM

Hmm. Idk but i kinda liked tazzs bar. Maybe the set up could of been worded better but i was diggin the longest yawn bit.
Tics was ok but kind of expected.

Regardless tic did word it better n came across with more fluidity.
If executed a lil better tazz would of won...


V tic

herpes 11-11-2014 10:35 AM

Liked Tics concept more but Tazz had better wording & flow with the multis

Vote-Tic Tac

BROKE LESNAR 11-11-2014 12:32 PM

the longest yawn ending didn't have much of a payoff

tic's was funny with a good misdirect, cool flip on the tied down concept

v-tic tac

Glossy Finish Dick Lips 11-11-2014 07:01 PM

I got Tac here - even tho the whole attacking some ones significant other is definitely stale and played out but the twist was nice.


Taz bar was ok but felt like he could gotten a little more harsher with it for more if an impact.

Spoken 11-11-2014 11:52 PM

Razz was alight if he had a better flip and execution on it but u got Tac cause he played off the bar and it was an instant t connect nothing fancy just enough

Clayray 11-12-2014 01:14 AM

Vote Tic-Tac


Didn't feel the punch in tazz bar.
Tic came light but only bc he knew that's all he had to do.


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