No Strings Attached

[Pinot Grij]

This was two people?

A lot of the rhyming seemed so effortless... those are always the best reads.

he tugged at our strings, but it was his being pulled.

That's a fantastic line.

That’s when he started to realise whoever controlled his commands
had mastered the art of propping him up, while holding him back.

Again.. holy fuck. Super slick.

This was pretty close to perfect. I have rarely seen anyone be able to create such empathy for a character as here. I was actually sad for the poor dude, lmao. The phrasing, the rhyming, the story, the emotion.. everything was bang on. Great read, thank you.